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i like the siers and find I good, I was wondering if you would also add Danielle but so it was still the original her please and thank you I am enjoying the it so far I can not wait for him to meet the crew!

You should continue it's great story.

Pls update

Good story keep it up

Well so far so good with the story and I like the plot and consept of it so far and I'm looking forward to seeing more latter on.

But I kinda think with all of these new powers he gain almost right away that he might be a bit OP, but still I like it nun the less and that's just me do whatever you wish.

I would like to see Dani here latter on wether she's a clone of Danny and Sabine, or just some random girl the Ghsot crew run into and took her in with them. Also I'm kinda hoping that say Danny will become a Mandalorian latter on and/or he takes the Tie Advance Prototype as his own fighter with Sabine giving it a painjob with his colors (being black, white and some green) on it.

Anyway mice work here keep up and hope to see more soon.

Well
the story starts off, so hey legendary crossover

And then the very summary just kills it, you go with people commit to easiest route for
crossover the whole everyone and Danny's
life is a colossal jerks for some reason to know Danny has to leave

Is almost as bad as all those only waking up one morning to find betray him
or you using a sort of ultimate enemy type event and having them all killed off

Just reading over the synopsis alone is always a note don't want to read this is crap
literally that was my 1st thought

Why couldn't you like to assess the devastating was a jerk. Okay the countries want to
use Danny for war the eye can see that. Actually I think this original object of the guys in
white make a lot more sense and then spending a fortune to wipe out the parallel universe
personally I thought the guy the whites agenda was an old-fashioned landgrab going to the
natives have superpowers and can fight back

Was ours it is do we try to write out jazz Sam Tucker. So Tucker would use Danny for
his parents tech I call BS on that. Danny's parents overly eager Tucker could
just walked in and become their assistant off the work for them. He does not need
Danny to get access to his parents tech. Sam supposedly want to use Danny of the kind
of political campaign yet is even more BS of epic proportions. Sam's feelings 3
predate Danny having powers. Him sending power to become a world-famous is like
winning a lottery with 1,000,000,000 of one odds, and Sam being scheming enough
use that to her advantage. It was in for extraordinary unique event Danny before
that was considered public enemy number 1
hell Sam wanted to run a campaign she even better off without Danny she has the
skills to resources and finance and do it without him. And given the popularity right
now the world college as being part of the world saving group
she could literally do it on her own again why the hell would she need Danny.
Is just an asinine reason to write out the whole romantic crap
Lily classic Sam bashing you don't want or the love interest
fine I can accept that. But don't rip her character new one and make her
act like damn joker to make it happen. You might as well replace her here
with some random OC

Hell the only one is even close to possible our Danny's parents. To do a lot of
4 science and for the Empire. But saying they want to create more half ghosts for money
and personal gain. Do you have any idea how to write those characters?

Do duties. Ever look like to give a rats ass about money? And given the stuff they've
invented already think about it portable power armor energy weapons and heard of power source.
Hover technology laser weaponry dimensional travel. Hell they whipped up damn Iron Man armor
for God sakes if they are interested in damn personal gain using any of that would
make them powerful and influential

In hell for the whole half ghosts idea they don't even need Danny, Vlad as a whole library
of research could easily get their hands on. And now that they've gone public odds are Danny
and his sister has shared all the phantom files is enough personal and scientific information
in their head again Danny's parents when it need Danny for half ghosts research.
Hell a technically crack it back in college

And now you see my problem just a synopsis alone brought the dislike for the whole situation
spacey a quick 5 minute cop out and get all the characters and phantom out of the way
so you agree to Danny straight into the adventure

You might as well just use the ultimate enemy type of event and killed everyone off
it's lazy writing. If the writer really want to think this over to the spent
couple of chapters building into it. Hell I'll even give you the synopsis right here

The coming fall part 1

Most the chapters told by Danny they start talking about how his friends are changing right
you could talk about how Sam say for instance was all loving and supportive
but over time you see the changes on her. Her being accepted and having a lot of friends
sent to various galas and get along with her mom

He could have Tucker become more sets of technology and its position

Need inspiration watch 1st season of Breaking Bad you Basie showed his friends and being
gradually corrupted.

Jazz could be offered say a full scholarship evening and dreams of becoming a professor for
all she has to do is write a few papers. They could make is the slippery slope

By the end of the 1st chapter you have Danny realizing his friends have been corrupted
2nd chapter could be a series of breaking points when he meets each person and sees what
kind of monsters to become. The point is Danny's friends aren't evil but the situation
they were forcing 2 since the fame has corrupted them

Danny eventually realizes his influence is what broke them only by removing it Kenny save them
I even go one step farther courtesy of clockwork shows Danny after breaking point to all heading
down on personal version of going dark Dan

Today's decision to leave and to change the world is actually a last-ditch attempt to save them

See I just gave you a broad overview. I was even trying it took me roughly 5 minutes
you don't even have to use it but still seems to fit more thought and more
consideration. Hell the phone a few personal tragedies we got that even more motivated
I know she did mentioned Valerie and Danielle. Have and that the corruption somehow
has consequences then getting hurt having is something else sinister happen

And now that that's out of the way let's talk with the actual a galaxy far far away portion
as she played out pretty well it's obviously this is where the writer for most of the meat
but again I feel is more of a half baked idea not fully implemented

Danny blatantly ignoring clockworks orders about using his powers seems almost foolhardy
unless clockwork even the suggestion knowing full well that was the plan that thought in Danny's
head Danny would think about it in go against it. I.e. one last little jab to push Danny
on a certain path

Ezra's weaknesses as a thief was he was alone and self trained. Danny's experience plus
his powers and given that he has no more ambiguity now about stealing Danny and Ezra
should be more than just getting by

Danny should be working towards making himself rich. He also could definitely hurt the Empire
thinking much more bigger. Danny could easily steal whole shipments spaceships weapon
supplies food you name it.

Why are they staying small fry here? Danny feels a blood the ship or whole cargo container
and then sells it they can make enough credits to buy their own ship wave a decent place
to live how Danny gets in the space singles for space pirate he pretty much financed
the whole damn rebellion. It's mostly my problem here both Ezra and Danny are
still thinking small

So overall I was in my previous mentioned disdain for the set up, Danny and Ezra's
earlier misadventures. Seem promising. The still a chance and when Danny needs to
rest the ghost crew things Mike a little more interesting.

A course the future prognosis of the story is not likely to continue
given time and pass in chapter 1, odds are the writers abandon this
in a given up on the concept or just lost all motivation

Good stories require planning and commitment, I don't see either on display here
I do see the start of a great idea the seeds of such things. Only time will
tell the writer can go the distance personally I'm a fan of crossovers
so I hope so

We shall see

what happen if people from danny phantom world relive what they done

Great story. I'm glad you did this pairing since there aren't many of them so it's unique. Please update soon. As for Danielle she should be added as the kid sister of the crew and be seen as a daughter by Danny and Sabine after they get together

Are you EVER going to continue this story?!

can you continue of this story in star wars eu mean star wars legends please

what will become danny old world after he left

interesting start, no Danielle please

What's the holdup?

When is this story going to be updated? Hopefully soon? please?