I'm glad to you're continuing this story, I really like what I've seen of Ivan's personality so far, and while Garon is still pretty cold I can see the subtle ways you're making him a bit more human, such as that laugh and his warning to Ivan.

But do the Norhians seem to worship Anankos, in the game Norhians worshipped the Dusk Dragon, and it was only Garon that ever mentioned Anankos?

There are still a few grammatical errors, but I can fix those for you if you want.

Reading this fanfiction helps remind me why I love reading them in the first place. A more cunning and proud Avatar that still seems to wish for peace. A brilliant combination that makes me eager to see if you can make the other chapters more interesting and realistic. Let's see you rise to even greater heights shall we.

I like that strategy; I, too, have considered a more devious Corrin, though I went to a far darker place with it.

Ah, so this is a legitimate flashback.

It makes perfect sense. I've seen plenty of authors use the localized name when aligning with Nohr and the Japanese name when aligning with Hoshido.

Not bad, its early so i cant say much about it, but i'll keep my eye out for this. Btw, do you take pairing suggestions? Thanks and good luck with your story.