Reviews for Fox of Trials |
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HyperA2019 chapter 4 . 9/11 I am looking foward to Chapter 6. |
Elle4Life chapter 5 . 8/1 Update |
hinatanamikazesama chapter 5 . 7/30 Pleaseeee update |
Jewel Vermilion chapter 3 . 7/13 Seriously this doesn't make any fucking sense please read through ya fukin story and get yourself a better beta |
Jewel Vermilion chapter 1 . 7/13 Ok I have to ask have you actually read this through or is your beta shite af |
inuyasha16451 chapter 5 . 7/5 Damn. That was amazing. Update soon please |
Samuel Santillan chapter 5 . 7/1 sube el capitulo 5,6 de Great Fox Demon, el capitul de Ninjas de Whirlpool y el capitulo 3 de Puente de dos caminos |
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 1 . 6/19 Ok so love the story but you really have a problem with grammar that makes it hard to enjoy |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 6/10 Well, I'm glad this was updated and damn Sasgay got dq'd huh and Naruto killed Akamaru huh shame but not what he did to Kiba that arrogant a-hole got what he deserved. |
draculyn28 chapter 5 . 5/31 ok good chapter, greetings. |
Darkknight333rd chapter 5 . 5/29 Thank you for the update I would like to see more |
The Quincy god chapter 5 . 5/25 but are you from a clan |
thomaspheasant chapter 5 . 5/25 please update immediately |
grimmich chapter 5 . 5/25 bwhahaha love the last line. |
jtcookie96 chapter 5 . 5/25 I...really don't know what I saw in this story. I guess I was desperate for a Naruto x Anko story but man my standards must have been shit. Your pacing is off, your spelling and grammar are atrocious, the story is a mediocre Naruto hates everyone and kills them without a second thought. the constant time skips are annoying too as you glance over character development with it. My advice and i implore you to take it, scrap the story, get better writing skills and maybe go over the source material again as it just seems you have no respect for it. Then when you've improved, try again. |