Reviews for River of Deceit
Renzo7 chapter 2 . 12/19/2019
Powerful story! Great work on presenting so many emotions.
hummergirlnv chapter 2 . 4/26/2019
I think this a very beautiful love scene.
Nyx Myst chapter 1 . 1/1/2019
Though this review will probably make absolutely no sense given the main character, thank you for detailing how mentally and emotionally fucked up Lucifer should be from a human standpoint. And yeah, the way you have this detailed with Lucifer having been about the human equivalent of 15 years old when he 'Fell' from Heaven and was cast into Hell, God is a totally unfit DICK of a parent. Thank you for posting.
Patougv chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
Thank you for sharing this story.
featherdusterpixie chapter 2 . 6/19/2018
wonderful!
featherdusterpixie chapter 1 . 6/19/2018
great writing!
LiaWalker chapter 2 . 2/10/2018
This is my actual pen name it just won’t let me login :( I loved this! I really wish it had ended with a text though LOL from Chloe to Maze :)
Stunning Sunset chapter 2 . 10/17/2017
Nice story!
MorganEveningstar chapter 2 . 10/8/2017
Good job!
Caringheart chapter 2 . 9/19/2017
Great job, couldn't have asked for better. Both chapters fantastic. Thanks.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/27/2017
So beautiful 3
azkabcn chapter 2 . 12/5/2016
Heartbreaking and beautiful all in one!
Debbydq chapter 2 . 11/14/2016
this was wonderful! He needed the comfort of Chloe the way it made an impact on him. Well written!
LuciferFan chapter 2 . 11/4/2016
Nice!
Blount64 chapter 2 . 11/3/2016
Hot and steamy. love it. Lucifer finally got to make the Detective call out his name in pleasure! more!
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