I hope everything works out! I hope to read more soon!

Jessie is struggling through some tough times... Thanks for the chapter! Happy Holidays!

...So Yunan KNEW something horrible was going to happen and didn't do anything about it because it was "the flow of destiny?" Or did he try yet couldn't because he didn't know exactly WHAT would happen? I think I'm starting to understand why the name is "Because of Fate."

Ah, Jessy has snapped. That's both good and bad. Bad for her of course, but good for the story. It just wouldn't be realistic if she stayed the same after an experience like that... I just wonder, can Yunan (or someone else) help her back on her feet before she actually harms someone else? Her dark and bitter side is starting to show after all... and has she fallen like the chapter title says? As in, has her rukh turned black? Judging from her thoughts that might have happened or might be happening soon.

I hope you'll update soon, perhaps even before the end of the year? Would be a good Christmas present for your readers. ;D

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Holy moly that chapter got dark at the end VERY quick... I'm glad Jessie is okay, but I totally understand why Yunan doesn't want for her to search for Kana. Great chapter! I hope school is treating you well and that you're not too stressed out. Remember to stay hydrated and eat healthy :)

Hmm so when Jessy got in to that car accident her father was in the car with her? Did I understand correctly? If I did then I wonder if we'll be seeing him in the world of Magi too... it would certainly bring a unique twist to this story.

It's also good to see Kana again, despite the situation she's in. Still waiting to see more canon characters too... I wonder which we'll see first, canon characters of Reim or canon characters of Kou?

I vote for Ren Koumie! v

Great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. I don't think Jessy and Yunan need a third wheel but whatever you think it should be I do think it w told be funny if Sinbad as the third wheel and just picture Yunan and Sinbad arguing about who gets Jessy would be funny.

I do think that it was sweet of Yunan to rescued Jessy but the ring help her out of her solution of being sold to someone nice.

Great job on this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. I'm rather confused about what Jessy fate is meant to be and I do hope that it is good.

Great job this chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter that you came up with. I do think that Jessy is a strong women in this when she was told strip naked of all her clothes.