Reviews for Lightning Marks |
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blackwhitewolfgirl17 chapter 11 . 10/30/2019 Can’t wait |
aiden064911 chapter 4 . 8/5/2019 Really love the work, but you need to check the spelling |
Tilty.bbb chapter 8 . 1/24/2019 This was a fantastic read well done |
Lila Arazona chapter 7 . 3/27/2018 In love with the story. One of my fav crack pairings️ Really want to read about the wedding and other things. Plsssssss update soon |
dogsrcool5 chapter 7 . 1/3/2018 Please write more |
amber.lincoln3 chapter 6 . 7/20/2017 Cute! |
dogsrcool5 chapter 6 . 7/20/2017 Please write more |
leenadavinci chapter 5 . 2/22/2017 ahhhh please continue! |
DisguisedBeauty chapter 5 . 1/7/2017 I have to admit.. Im a little dissapointed.. I loved the way your story was going and I LOVE the LaLu.. but.. where's the action? You totally skipped over all the GOOD juicy action parts. Like the fight with Lucy and Minerva, there are so many amazing things you could have done with that! But instead you just summarized what happened and jumped around. Readers what excitement, not summaries. I still believe your story is good with lots of potential, but based off these last few chapters and especially this one I think you need to slow down and think about your plot some more. Add more detail, intensify the battle scenes, stop trying to rush things along. These are just my suggestions to you. |
dogsrcool5 chapter 5 . 1/7/2017 Please write more. Its a really good story |
Katie2001 chapter 5 . 1/7/2017 awesome chapter I can't wait for the next chapter |
magnificent dragoness chapter 4 . 11/25/2016 Please update soon! This is amazing! |
FairyTailBookworm chapter 4 . 11/17/2016 Oooo! That's cool! Love what Lucy's got in her arsenal now. But I do hope that she uses her celestial magic more than her new powers. Like if she uses the it's cause the worlds ending or something. I feel really bad for Laxus and Lucy since they were giving so much crap about being together. Like not in a bad way like how everyone is in their business. What about Levy and Lisanna? They should feel annoyed that they didn't get a huge party for their marking! Can't wait to see what's going to happen! |
leenadavinci chapter 4 . 11/16/2016 omg please continue! |
dogsrcool5 chapter 4 . 11/16/2016 Please write more |