Reviews for The Need to Become Stronger
QuestionsForSome chapter 49 . 8/23
This cliffhanger is crazy
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5
This naruto is the most useless person ive ever read about. Everyone is stronger than him, makes fun of him, beats him, hes weak has no ninja abillies is completely useless. Why is naruto loud and annoying, do you know he was a shy kid in canon intill the 3rd hokage talked to him, there is no reason naruto growing up with someone and he would still be like this.
AlsoSprachOdin chapter 9 . 5/25
I keep coming back to read the "walking" argument again and again. It's just brilliant.
"I don't wanna go on the cart" - obligatory monthy python reference.
VeryPeeved chapter 5 . 5/12
people who put their politics into their Author's notes burn in a very special level of hell. a level reserved for child molesters and people who talk at the theater.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/29
I'm actually really enjoying this, not just because a pet peeve of mine is how few authors address how much shadow clones would fuck you in the head and you're one of those that IS. You've set a really good dark tone, I'm liking ALL your team 7 characters. You haven't updated in a while and I'm hoping it's a hiatus rather than abandonment, but really enjoying this dude. Keep up the good work.
Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 11/4/2019
This is basically Canon. Boring
kavoss chapter 5 . 9/12/2019
HA, GET REKT LIBTARD
HerMadnessMac chapter 5 . 8/14/2019
...Kakashi implying that the mission does rank over your teammates? I mean, it makes sense in the context of the world you're setting up, but it's a little surreal to read.

And God, what a time warp it was to watch you beg people not to vote for Trump. Wish more had listened
HerMadnessMac chapter 4 . 8/14/2019
So Mizuki was indeed a traitor through and through. Have to say it IS interesting that you didn't set Iruka up as someone we would route for instead. Everyone has their motives! Which... actually sounds about right.

Papa Ibiki? Dying
HerMadnessMac chapter 3 . 8/14/2019
No no no no no! Bad Mizuki! Dramatic irony strikes again.
(also Researcher!Naruto? Love him)
HerMadnessMac chapter 2 . 8/14/2019
I forgot to say that I really enjoyed how you already had Sakura standing up for Naruto last chapter! Glad to see that their friendship is continuing :)
HerMadnessMac chapter 1 . 8/14/2019
I think I've only seen the switch to Mizuki being Naruto's "trusted" teacher before-and certainly not while retaining his morally gray edge! Interested to see how this pans out. And what made you switch?
JLdark chapter 38 . 8/10/2019
Wow, I really did not see that coming! Sasuke proposal was really unexpected! what is he planning? how this helps him to get revenge on Itachi? How will Hinata react if she is forced to marry? And what about Naruto too? is interesting how her personality could change to be more assertive, yet will her kindness disappear with that new change? Her kindness is not fitting for a ninja but it's one of her biggest strength.
JLdark chapter 37 . 8/10/2019
At least Naruto could bent some of his frustrations, but I'm curious what is his plan in all that, does he still wants to become Hokage and change things? or other way to change the world around him?
JLdark chapter 36 . 8/10/2019
Seems Naruto can't keep with really happens around him, he questions those around him and why they don't do anything about injustice or what he thinks it's bad, but I guess that how it works. Seems he either change it if he can, but he would not make everything better or everyone happy, there's always someone that will be angry or react bad to what he does or tries to do.
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