Awesome fanfiction! Thank you for posting! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Please more chapters

I love it but are you going to continue it needs a good ending. I with like to print the page so I could read it at work. This is my email address if you with like to send it to me so I could print them it was really good I give 5 star

Make more okay

We want more!

I'm hoping for an update soon!

I really love this story please update soon also the next chapter could be about Luke and Penelope on a relationship and her healing within time love this story make more please

Penelope seems to be way too put together way too soon after what happened to her. If you're going to put her in that situation in which she is repeatedly raped by multiple men in front of her colleague that she has feelings for- then you need to commit to the change and emotions the character would be experiencing. I feel like you had the rape just for the sake of having the rape but didn't commit to really writing it and writing the way it affected her character.

For the most part, I enjoyed the first few chapters of this fiction. Some of the dialogue and banter between Luke and Garcia is genuine, though I wish there was more banter. The plot line with the cop being the big bad is nice although I think his character could have been developed more tenderly. I think Sam being involved is a pretty big stretch- doesn't seem to fit well. I also think some of the dialogue was a bit awkward at this point. Plot holes too. Like if this is the guy who's murdered all these people- why would he get so easily tripped up by Luke's presence or why would he appear so obviously aggressive? It would also seem unlikely that Reid and JJ would leave to go get snacks. Sorry if this seems negative- I don't mean for it to be. I'm really looking forward to seeing this finished and the underlying story is really good, it's just some surface stuff that needs polished.

I think that you should have. Luke and Garcia dateing. 1st then Garcia. And luke. Have a baby twin girls then. Garcia ex boyfriend try kidnaps her. And they twins. Luke is meet Morgan for the 1st time so then it will 6weeks to find them than luke and Garcia get merry okay

I never put Alvez and Garcia together until I started reading this fanfiction. Now I am completely addicted. Whichever direction you take these characters, know that I will follow. :)

Yo optaría por pequeñas citas. Algunas sencillas café en casa o algo así y poco a poco pasar a cenar fuera y eso porwue García no estará preparada aún para dejarse llevar pero poquito a poco en pequeñas citas para que pierda la desconfianza ira surgiendo algo :)

I love it,we all love it, but we want more!

please update!

Thank you for updated and more okay 70