Cant wait to read more

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

OK I'm so all in one this story. I love your OC Alex is amazing and her dynamic with Riddick is so sensually tasty. Awesome job with your writing I can't wait to read the next chapter.

wow...Alex has a side of her that is finally coming out that may be challenging Riddick...wonder who will be the better alpha?...can't wait to read the next chapter and find out if Alex and Riddick go toe to toe for alpha. :D

now that was a complete twist. I didn't see that coming at all. this chapter is what I would consider as a teaser and u my friend can tease with the reader's senses. wonder what the next chapter will hold or reveal.

all I have for this is "heart pounding". I will let you decide on what I'm talking about...lol...I also could smell the fresh blood and visualize the scene...gut wrenching...but amazing I thought...keep up the awesome writing...

this chapter shows a softer side of Riddick that has never been seen before. I like it. once again I can visualize the scenery with the termites mounds and smell the air around

this chapter got right down to the nitty gritty...and when I say nitty gritty...I mean better put down the reads and take a cold shower...can't wait to see what the next chapter has to reveal...carry on my wayward son...carry on...

Awesome story so far!

this is a very interesting beginning...once the two main characters meet for the first time, u can really feel that sexual attraction between them. can't wait to read on. Plus...the detail of the scenery is so amazing I can actually picture and smell in my mind the whole scene... 3...that to me is how a story catches my attention