Reviews for Battlestar Invictus
Guest chapter 16 . 3/10
When will the future possibilities ever show up?
Please finish this story.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/21
Great story.
but will it ever be finished, cause right now it has been left hanging.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/1
Great story!
When will the future possibilities come into play?
It would be nice if possible to see some new chapters written for this story to show up in this new year.
Guest chapter 15 . 12/23/2019
Come on, when are you ever going to write more chapters for this story?
If you cannot finish the story, at least give it to someone who will.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/6/2019
I really REALLY like how this story is going. however, I do have some issues.
There should be far more of a culture shock between the imperials and colonials.
They are both technically humans but realistically the imperium as a TOTALLY different place.
why was there no outrage about the Abominable Intelligence by the Tech-Priests?
I don't understand why a Battlestar wouldn't have a Machine Spirit. LASGUNS have a machine spirit!
The imperial naval attache should be very uncomfortable on a Battlestar, it is for all intents and purposes a Xenos vessel. The layout and appearance are completely different from any imperial design, the ship is very spartan and functional compared to any imperial warship, has now shrines or other signs of devotion to the imperial creed and worst of all, it's a brand new ship! there are few if any ships under a few hundred years old in the imperium. if I was an imperial I would find that very strange.
heavenly777protector chapter 2 . 12/4/2019
really like the direction here! the fact that they have come into some old battleground gives a perfect excuse to figure things out a bit and gather intel before the FRAK hits the fan at FTL. I wonder if Imperium Star charts would even make sense to the Colonials because of the degradation of knowledge and VASTLY different cultures...
and IS THE EMPEROR A LORD OF KOBOL?
heavenly777protector chapter 1 . 12/4/2019
okay loving that a Choas ship is the very first encounter! it would be really interesting to see Choas Cylons. Caprica 6 would be Slannesh (of course). and the idea of the chaos gods or even the Emperor of Mankind as Lords of Kobol is also really cool. the battle was well done, seems that the 40k weapons would be more powerful, but you really showed the main weakness of most 40k ships EG limited firing arcs so that works along with the surprise factor. any chance of Cyons meeting Necrons? that would be an interesting situation.
Guest chapter 16 . 12/1/2019
Since no new chapters for this story has come forth out of darkness into the light,
I can assume that this story is dead?
If not would you please write another chapter soon.
Guest chapter 16 . 10/25/2019
Great story you have here.
I would love it, if there were some updates made, like more chapters written.
Keep writing please.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/11/2019
The jump drive is the single most important piece of tech the colonels have. They could buy entire colonised star systems for it.

Any 0lans for it?
Guest chapter 16 . 7/7/2019
Where is the rest of the story?
Guest chapter 16 . 6/14/2019
It has been some time since I have looked at this great story.
And I must ask one what the world has happened to it?
I know life is crazy and we all have lots to do, lives to live and so on,
but when will more chapters be forth coming?
Hopefully before I drop dead.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/26/2019
Where is the rest of this story?
When will you ever write more chapters?
Guest chapter 16 . 3/5/2019
I do hope things have sorted themselves out, and that you are now able to write some more chapters
for this story.
monbade chapter 16 . 3/2/2019
good story will watch for more.
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