i hate to say this, but they way valka is written is very poor. it's a carbon copy Stoick, and the hybrid subplot us sub-par. otherwise it's okay.

“I love...” sushi? Sorry, this just felt so tense that my brain deflated like a balloon lol.

I like the idea but the one thing that doesn't make sense is why wouldn't Valka already know? Its not like he could have hidden his wings, tail, and ears as a baby. Also I think you should have kept Stoick as the single parent instead of Valka; its a neat switch but unfortunately it just creates some plot holes/an ooc Valka in the story. In my opinion I think it would have made more sense if i went a little like this...

So Valka comes to Berk after her mate has been taken from her as seen in the previous chapter. She meets Stoick of course and they fall in love, marry, and then her children come. She hides the fact that Hiccup is part Nightfury, and leaves Toothless to fend for himself as learned later. She keeps the secret from Stoick for lets say 5 years (by this point Hiccup is keeping the secret from his father as well and will be able to continue on his own) when the Stormcutter takes her away trying to protect her by taking her away from the bad humans who would kill her should they find out she's a dragon. She of course doesn't return kept back by her own fears, leaving Hiccup with his resentful father who partly blames him for the incident.

Now the fact that his parent doesn't know makes much more sense. That or you could have had Valka know, but still the motivation for her resenting her son is still a little lost to me. Valka doesn't seem to be the type to mimic Stoick's actions, and there was no added motivation for her to do so either. That's why these changes just make more sense to me.

but, isn't valka a dragon?

many questions and different choices on how the story continues left unanswered

Yes! I like this plot. The OC characters and original merges perfectly. This is another one of those stories where I wonder why it isn’t super popular. Oh wells, people are obviously missing out.

On a side note, the writing is great and all but I’ve noticed sometimes you spell words backwards; you might want to fix that. Oh and you tend to use “to” in places where “too” should be. Lastly, you could get someone to read over the piece sometime because there are minor mistakes like a missing word here and there. Another pair of eyes might help.

P.S. I know this is late but hey, I’m still reading it

This is from the deleted scene! The one that's sketched and roughly animated. Right? Awesome!

This is so cute my teeth are rotting and I’m spitting rainbows how can I love this this much?!11!1

I have never been so confused after reading a fic before, very confusing. Good ideas, but just very confusing.

Okay!
Uuuuuh
I like your use of details from the first film (?)

I love how you used the narration from the film

Whoa,
I love the idea of this story

Okay...so...Gustav is now her brother.
Gustav.
The one thing that's worse than Daggur.
Is Gustav.
Her new brother.
...HA!

hah.

kcab...you mean BACK right? XDbtw..cool.