I really enjoyed this.

Intense chapter. Great!

Amazing story. Thank you for your work!

Good AU, finished the details.

They don't remove spleens unless they absolutely have to. spleens help your red blood cells, help with infectious diseases, taking it out makes you more susceptible to infectious diseases and bacteria. I think you meant the appendix it has no function in the body and generally speaking most surgeons will snip it if its there.

This way out of character for Ziva, she's a professional assassin, she wod never cut the sound. no matter how much Tony annoys her. He's on the job and so is she.

Really awesome story. Thanks for writing and posting! I greatly enjoyed reading it! I do love me a good story where Tony and Tim have each other's backs!

Great story.

Well. That's a rather sad ending. For everyone. But especially me.

This was really well done - I loved it. Thanks so much!

Really nice version of Dead Air. I really like that Tim wasn't a doormat for Ziva and that him and Tony ended up sticking together. Also, now they're making a difference for people who really had no hope of ever seeing justice before they took over. Well written.

Of the many versions of 'Dead Air' I enjoyed this one where Tim and Tony stayed friends. But it was sad that the team split up. And it's not a surprise that Gibbs left I feel after those 2 left he would have felt his family breaking apart and I think it was better of him to leave and sail around than putter around in the same house like he did after his family died.

That was... it was good. But wow, that ending was depressing. It was super realistic tbh but damn depressing.

A very interesting version of the Dead Air Episode - one of the best I've read.

I think I like Tim and Tony being on the same team - they go well together.
One has the investigative skills and the other has the computer and tech skills.

I see Gibbs did a runner. I wonder if the IA investigated him as well?

Great but sad story. I had hoped Gibbs would act more aggressively to stay with both in the hospital. I wonder what happened when Gibbs and Cornell met after Tony quit. I enjoyed your take on this possible sundown for Team Gibbs.