I loved the story! It's amazing. I've read a lot of drarry stories and I think that this one's the most interesting. It's actually realistic and the way you portrayed the characters is brilliant. Of course I just can't forget about Pipsqueak and her sheer adorability. It was simply wonderful.

Also, really hate your Draco, I liked him a lot at first, but now he just seems like an annoying twat that's never willing to admit to being wrong which is really tiring. Sorry, has to include this, can't stress enough how much the character has started to bug me especially since I thought he'd be so much better at the start.

Ok, it's taken me a while to write this in a way that isn't just complete verbal abuse, because this is something that's really annoyed me while reading and has caused me to skip several paragraphs out of sheer boredom and frustration. But when you're writing dialogue, especially when it's a conversation, it needs to flow and feel as though we're reading vaguely in-time to the conversation. For this to happen, you really can't cut in between the conversation with paragraphs upon paragraphs of meaningless text that basically explains people's feelings that you've already explained previously. Even taking several sentences to explain someone's tone of voice and relating it to how they used to speak is too much. I get where you're coming from with much of it, though you can't place it in the middle of a conversation and expect it to work, it detracts from the conversation and detracts from the meaning of the interruption. Ok, I hope that got my point across without being too harsh, because I'm serious when I said this frustrated me, I had a full on verbal bash typed up and almost pressed send before skipping several paragraphs to get to where the story should have just continued on from in the first-place.

I can not stress enough how aggravating this whole conversation is, it drags on forever without conveying any real information and is just overall really disappointing compared to how the rest of the fic was looking.

The conversation with Hagrid is painfully slow and evasive and just a horrendous read!

I just wanted to express how much I absolutely LOVED this story! You are such an incredible writer and your characterization is impeccable. I was a bit sad that Blasé and Loony never got together but I was loving their dynamic as friends nevertheless! Everything in this story felt so genuine and natural, and it had me hooked. I came here after reading another wonderful story of yours and I will continue to go through your Drarry works because WOW!

I’m really loving this story, it’s very much a slow burn but so worth the wait! Very well written! Love the character development from Draco and Harry, you really made sure to get them to a place that it made sense when their relationship took the next step! Thank you

This was such a different kind of Drarry story.
Im overjoyed that you put the story first and didn't bring romance into it, til the last few chapters.
You are the first author to add a magical creature as a pet in all the ones I have read til now.
Thank you so much for keeping me entertained these past few days.
It would be interesting if you make a sequel to what happens next especially Pipsqueak.
Anyhow I'm off to read another one of your works of art.
Take care

I thought a Tod in a fox family was a male, am I wrong?
Just a thought.

Funny, now in my head, when using my imagination to picture the foxlets.
I'm seeing the small fennec fox with bat wings. Interesting combination.
So far this story is intriguing!
Keep writing and I'll continue reading!

Good start to the story,
I wonder what will happen?
Keep writing and I'll continue reading!

I love love love your writing style! After reading Salty Sweet, I am definitely in love how you wrote out the scenarios, the room or the places they were in. It was just right. I was definitely pulled into the story, and the vividness of it. Even the feelings, I would find myself grinning or smiling at the scenario. The pace also was perfect! I don't have any other words to say or even a critique. You definitely have your style to say. Something that.. I am still finding for myself in terms of my own writing or even my own drawings. Still, your story was quite the treat! Sorry for the long ass review, but I definitely enjoyed the read! Thank you for writing this! :)

This is probably the most well written drarry fanfic I have ever read. I love how their relationship forms naturally instead of accidental spells, mates, potions,etc. The best one by far!

I read constantly but don’t review very often. I love your story. It was very well written and super adorable. Thanks

This story was absolutely phenomenal. Thank you so much. There were a few places in various installments where a beta could have helped... editing left random words in, etc., but the whole story was just adorable and much more in character than so many. Thanks again!