Reviews for War Pains
otherrealmwriter chapter 5 . 7/6
This was a pretty good story and like that it had a good conclusion. I'd like more of how Alfred handles NYC on his own, but hey it's your story. Nice job
PineNutPesto chapter 5 . 2/18
Yes! He got to a good place! I'm so glad. :')

That scene at the end kind of reminded me of a wildlife rehabilitator setting a creature free.
PineNutPesto chapter 4 . 2/18
I'm so glad Alfred's recovering so well.
PineNutPesto chapter 3 . 2/17
I forgot he was only 19. :(

They're both being remarkably mature about the their-own-relationship part of the therapy. I hope it sticks.

Thanks for posting!
PineNutPesto chapter 2 . 2/17
I'm so glad Arthur is there for him. And that was a lovely poem.
PineNutPesto chapter 1 . 2/17
Poor Alfred. Soldiers do not get enough credit for the torment they bring back with them.

Thanks for posting yet another excellent story!
Spirit Seer chapter 5 . 6/14/2018
Wow. I'm not entirely sure what else I can apply to this story other than 'wow.' Most of my praise has already been sung by other readers, but it's so incredibly well-written, not just in the stylistic or the psychological sense but, to borrow from another reviewer, in it's humanity. You hit at the heart of things beautifully and compassionately. Bravo.

This was absolutely wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing it. :)
Inky-Paws chapter 5 . 12/15/2017
*round of applause*
Kayleigh1789 chapter 5 . 10/9/2017
This is sooooo good! It actually reminded me a lot of when my cousin came back from Afghanistan, so it hit kinda close to home. I don't know why I hadn't read this sooner!
Scaredsoul1910 chapter 5 . 1/27/2017
Alfred was so bloody cold to Arthur that it actually hurt to read. I had to stop reading a couple of times in the first two chapters.

I love how their realationship mended so gradually. It was very sweet and warm.

I gotta admit that I was holding back on reading this story; I thought it to be sad. It wasn't, though. I enjoyed it very much.

I thank u for the constant lift ups. :)
Magentacrazedgirl8 chapter 5 . 12/28/2016
Yay! Happy ending!
I couldn't help, but imagine Too Many Puppies playing in the background of Alfred's flashbacks.
iciclebeanbags chapter 5 . 12/27/2016
Good grief how did this make me so emotional? It was a happy ending!

I just love how this story focused more on the recovery rather than the horrors of war that Alfred faced. Not only was it that much easier to read, but it also gave those subtle undertones of hope.

Okay I'm excited for your future projects! Here's to hoping for more happy endings!
iciclebeanbags chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
Aww, that was so sweet! Reading this certainly lifted my mood.
The Fan Frog chapter 5 . 12/23/2016
This kind of story always makes me happy. When someone else can go through struggles like this and come out winning, it makes me feel like I can do that too. This was a great story. I can't wait to read the next one. :)
ScarletTheFallenYouth chapter 5 . 12/21/2016
Aww! This was amazing, but most of your work usually is! XD
I loved Arthur and Alfred's relationship in this. I don't find many fan fics where they are brothers.
Also, I'd like to write a Hetalia fanfic, but I'm worried that people won't like it. Have any advice?
-Scarlet
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