that was good

Please friggin update. I would totally love to see more of your amazing writing. don't give up

Are u gonna continue? I love ur writing! Please keep going!

Please don't discontinue! This is one of my favourite stories! Please update soon! I love it! It's so good and gets me right in the feels! My heart was literally about to burst when I read her fight with Jace and then she was sad... she should distance herself from both of them and Jace will notice and ahhhhhhhhhh! I don't care what but please update!

its really good! PLEASE DONT discontinue it!

I hope that Jace soon notice that clary is having a problem

Interesting story you have and please update soon i like to read more whats going to happen to Clary... I just starting to read this story so please dont stop writing this story...

Please have jace notice her cuts...i want him to get concerned over her. Maybe he can go to grab her arm and she cries out. Amd why the hecm do jace and jon talk and socialize with kaleie when she is bullying clary? How do they not know about twitter? If they do amd still hang out with her, that is messed up. I almost want clary to get drunk and try to kill herself or something so jon and jace notice more that she is seriously not are bei g a crappy bro and friend though. Maybe she can run away for a bit and not go to school? Meet someone who helps her ...maybe a rehab for emotions and cutting, and the drama would get the two boys scared for her and push the bulllying into the spotlight...like they could find out how those two teamed up with sebastian.i like what you worte, continue

Don't give up! One story I wrote (which happened to be , I think, some of my best 'work') only got like 10 follows and less reviews after like 10 chapters, I still kept going because I like creative the outlet that writing gave me. Keep going. I'd like to see where you go with this story.

I gotta know what happens to Clary. Why the hell is everyone su a dick to her? What is Jace thinking? We need that chapter from his POV, please? He seems like such an asshole wit what he said to her and his apology was kind of half added. I just want to know how he really feels

I love this story! Can't wait for another update! :) This may sound weird, but I like, really REALLY liked their fight, it put me on edge and then they made up and im like yes... Can't wait to see where it goes! :) keep writing because this is AMAZING!

i like this story! update soon please!

I think you're off to a good start for your first fanfic! I would love a chapter from Jace's pov. I would love to know what is going on in his head. Keep writing!

I'd love a chapter from Jaces POV. Do Jon and Jace just not know how she's being treated by Aline and Kaelie? If they do, how could they want anything to do with them? And poor Clary, even if Jace didn't mean it, he is contributing to her image issues

Cool story, when's your update schedule though, please update soon