So sweet! Their interaction is beautiful in this story. And Akira finally gets to act like his Joker self.

They are so sweet! Too bad there is no actual point in the game where such a relationship would be possible, what with Sae being on Akira's tail, etc.

I come here because I have started (Well I say started but has put 60-somewhat hours) into Persona 5 royal and its awesome, and Makoto is my main love from when I played p5 (did the teacher first because I was surprised they added her as a love), so now I need some akira and Makoto fanfic and I love your Yu and Naoto one shots so here I am, good chapter

Sorry reviewing your stories took so long, but here I am, and I'm excited to give my thoughts on your writing. :D

What kind of bizarro world is this? Makoto surprising Akira? Telling him to stop working and hang out with her?! I like it. I enjoy turning things on their head.

I like this set up. I like seeing Makoto being so insistent her boytoy doesn't do anything. He's on break, and she'll kick his ass to make him rest if she has to.

Aww. Lap pillow. Love the little dialogue the two have together. Very sweet. Sounds like they're already married, if you ask me.

I love that last paragraph. Like something out of a fairy tale. Grade A material! Good work. :D

Quite a sweet piece. With the release of Royal, I'm hoping to see some more content be produced that utilizes the game's new scenes. Some I had in mind were Ann and Makoto getting crepes after making up, the Summer Festival where you actually spend time with one of the girls, her Third Awakening scene, etc. Your updates a refreshing thing. Good chapter!

Awesome chapter.

Yes! Christmas time~ No better way to celebrate than with some bad movies!

And a Wild Futaba! Throw a Pokeball at it. Sorry. Weaken it first!

Aww... A nice Christmas with family and friends. Absolutely sweet.

A great story! Super sweet!

Sorry to hear you haven't been sleeping well. Hope you feel better soon.

Love having Akira being a caring, sweet boyfriend. Good work.

I'm glad he can tell the difference between being supportive, and enabling her bad habits. Such wisdom from such a young man!

"I have a stamp card." Ha. Made me smile.

A sweet little story inspired by real life. I like it! Great work on this sweet, little chapter.

Akira knows her best: when she needs to rest and how to provide that rest.
I wrote something similar for Ch 11 of "Past the Gloom".
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"Stop in Unbreakable for two minutes"

Did you perchance mean, "Untouchable"?

wow. that soo wholesome ill melt.

why i have a though that Makoto have her own umbrella but didnt take it out and choose to share Akiras i sted and

Voted in your poll, and I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Good luck!

Cute chapter. I'm assuming before they actually started to date, or were even friends.

It was nice. Sweet and short, but still very sweet. Good job!

I would love to see a long form Makoto/Akira story from you.

I think that would be great.

First things first, don't be so hard on yourself, friend. Not everything you write is going to up to your perceived standard, and that's okay. It can still be good, and fun, and entertaining. It's okay to think this isn't your best work, but don't be yourself up about it.

Secondly, to me, toeing the line is fine, I encourage it even. Young love is a lot of things, and sometimes, it can be a bit heated. That's life, and I think it's important to capture that.

Awww. Not gonna lie. That opening tugged at my freakin' heart. I absolutely loved it. Fantastic.

Love how Akira is just done with the TV after that grass joke. Terrible humor like that should be punished. Clearly, someone needs to get their hearts stolen. Kidding.

"If you don't want to fight me, then fight me." I don't know what movie this is. But I love it.

Oh man. I super relate to Makoto watching movies. I do the same thing. Sometimes I think about how I like your Makoto more than the canon one. You should have written their SL. Not that hers is bad, it just lacks focus, in my opinion.

I love it when characters love each other's scars. So sweet.

Honestly? I thought this was great. One of your best works, and I mean that. If I could favorite chapters, I would favorite this because you captured a lot of what's so perfect about Makoto and Akira's relationship. The teasing, the movies, the fun side of Makoto, and a little bit of spice.

Absolutely loved it. No joke, great job, pal!

I liked it.