Put the girls that are on the maybe harem list in the harem

please continue this story. Really love it and and to see what happens next.

yea your story is getting ridiculous your no better then the authors who write smut fictions... look i get it this is dxd fiction but be realistic why you think most if not all harem fictions don't continue? simple the author gets over run'd because he or she has to focus on the harem part more then the actually plot that they were trying to go for but instead it becomes a jumbled mess because they have to focus more on ALL the girls getting dates or fucked or them having girl talk... soo i'ma just say it you need to know to man up stop thinking with your dick... sorry to sound harsh bro but you and a bunch of authors let you viewers dictate relationships/harems you all have this insecurity that you don't put a certain girl in you think your readers are gonna scorn you, like the canon peerage harem girls they are so overused it makes me wanna puke im talking about rias, aken, asia, koneko, etc its tiresome to see plus be better to see girls from different panteons used instead of the same ones thats constantly used...

Great, another story where the author writes only a few members in the harem then just keeps adding more and more. And you even said it would be hard to manage. And what happens because of this? Story is dead just like every other one out there that pulls this garbage. Unless it's a smut fic, 4-5 is like the maximum amount manageable, but only if the fic is like 100k words minimum so you can preserve quality.

Ugh, it's just so frustrating. The idea is nice. The grammar is acceptable and better than most... But this happens. When can writers of harems learn to mostly think for themselves? Because if you don't draw the line... Like you said you would, then you'll end up adding like the entire damn cast.

Anyway, that's my criticism and I hate that I have to drop this. Please don't make this mistake again. I'm a writer as well, although I haven't decided to post here yet... I know from experience how hard it would be to keep everything together with so many women... It kills your ideas and plans because of it, which in the end makes you abandon it.

Be good, because no hard feelings. Thanks for reading.

Yay! Not shitheat raynare!

Please continue this story? Really really good. Want to know what happens next.

Could have the ladies of all the houses to make this great book greater

So far so good few spelling errors but hey no one's perfect. I've liked what I read so far it's funny and there's a little twist in the plot that's nice. Keep up the good work sir

just checking through for some good reading and I stumbled upon this. So far my good sir I'm very impressed well-written well-thought-out so far and. I'm curious to see what you have next keep up the good work

Great story hope you come back to it someday

Update

is there ravel in harem?

Sorry, this is more of a question. Is Asia going to be imtroduced into the story? And what happened to that other girl that was saved alongside that Fallen Angel chick (I forgot their names)? Is Ravel going to be apart of Issei’s Harem? And my last question is more of a long term question about a characters from the Kyoto Arc in the anime/manga, the two Fox Yokais, are they going to be apart of Issei’s Harem too?

My only problem so far is how your rushing the move in's. You haven't shown why Raynare has the mark. Plz give more motivation as to why these girls have marks. And not just because the story cause for it to happen. There should been a HUGE fight between Risa and Ray.

Fantastic story i love it just wonderin when u where goin to be doin the next chapter its been over a year plz continue it