Reviews for Playing Defense
Hedwig68 chapter 5 . 6/19
Great story
Well Done.
Murkatroyd chapter 5 . 5/3
This was a nice story. You did a good job in establishing Harry as awkward and rather set in his norms, and fleshing out his relationships with the people around him. Well done.
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 5 . 11/17/2019
Somewhat cute, but not as good as a few of your other stories I’ve read.
iChaos chapter 5 . 4/3/2019
Great story. The writing was a little too vague in some spots, but the overall gist of the plot was straightforward enough and the dialogue was pretty good. Under the circumstances, I can easily imagine that it it would turn out this way.
arata7kasuga chapter 5 . 2/20/2019
I had a suspicion Harry was serious about getting married on that Tuesday as soon as he asked. Good for him and Daphne definitely matched him perfectly :D
arata7kasuga chapter 4 . 2/20/2019
Now that was cute! And oh my god, Ron grew up! He observes and notices things! Run everyone!
arata7kasuga chapter 3 . 2/20/2019
What Harry wants is most definitely not too much to ask for, tho why he would want to be in the muggle world is beyond me. But he should definitely not settle for less than what he said.
arata7kasuga chapter 2 . 2/20/2019
Wait a couple things confused me. Harry should not be going gray already right? Not for like at least another thirty or so years. He is a wizard and they age a lot better than muggles and live longer too yeah? Also, couldn't Harry just levitate his own glasses to him or accio them instead of having Flip do so?
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
Uh, he doesn't have trouble getting dates, he has obviously been on some. It is choosing the right person he has trouble with. xD
Raven3182 chapter 5 . 2/18/2019
Fun story. I would have liked to see more development of Daphne's character - we never really get to see who she is own her own, but only as Harry's love interest. But other than that, I enjoyed the read. Thanks for writing!
D00rFr4m3 chapter 5 . 1/14/2019
This was an excellent read.

I think my favorite part of this au is that Harry and Ginny get along after their breakup. I've never seen that done before, oddly. That they're not only amicable, they're actively still friends. That's really nice.

Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.
Crypt chapter 5 . 1/10/2019
A very sweet story. Although I’m a bit shocked they didn’t have a child together...

Thanks for sharing
noreenklose chapter 5 . 11/3/2018
Nice one.
I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for writing.
delia cerrano chapter 5 . 9/20/2018
A good story but I wish Harry and Daphne had a child. He just seems like such a family man who should have at least a bit bigger family. Daphne would be such a cool and calm Mother. Liked Athena and Ted together though Ted didn't seem overly in love with Athena...more like "oh well why not" Like an old shoe.
Wyrmridr chapter 5 . 9/15/2018
I'm just gonna be honest here - I *hate* Ron. Always have. But your Ron? This version, I like. Very well-written story. Kudos!
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