Reviews for The Heir Apparent |
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Starlord Master chapter 1 . 2/11 Cool story, please write more chapters. |
Galaxy diamond chapter 1 . 11/23/2019 YOU MUST CONTINUE |
Marv1n chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 I'd like to see more |
Deliberatee chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 Oh babies~! Sequel please! You can't leave this as is; it's cruel :P Any child of Albedo would be so adorable heh. I can also totally see her as a doting mother and Ainz has that father instinct going for him too so they would be the perfect parents while the rest of the NPCs will be great uncles and aunties ;) The heir would be so spoiled haha, although I hope he grows up with the balance of humbleness and superiority, respect to his elders (not like welps these days), wit and wisdom and of course power. Wow.. he'll be so OP while still being adorable lol :3 |
SilverShadow767 chapter 1 . 6/23/2018 This was awesome! I really want more! |
BabyConYuu chapter 1 . 4/19/2018 Ohhh! This one's amazing! And cute! I can't help imagine a very cute mini ainz! Please please don't abandon this amazing story! Update this please |
gold crown dragon chapter 1 . 2/16/2018 hnggggg! |
Shalltear Bloodfallen chapter 1 . 5/21/2017 So adorable! |
PrometheusTheXelNaga chapter 1 . 4/7/2017 Ohhh, this is wonderful. Please do continue with the short encounters with other guardians. Your other fic is very good too. |
Modify the Lifestream chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 Cute. |
Deathstrokenator chapter 1 . 12/10/2016 This was so WTF but it was quitwe good anyway |
The Reviewer chapter 1 . 11/16/2016 A motherly Albedo is strange, but welcome. Honestly, the woman's love for Momonga is hilarious with the antics that come with it, but she really doesn't have much of a character beyond her changed settings. She also may be a sadistic bitch, but that is almost every female NPC in Nazarick, so love filled obsession is pretty much the only thing that defines the character her. To be fair, Momonga pretty much hates himself for what he did to her, which can lead to some well written sad moments in the series. But that still does not change the fact she barely has a character at times. Which is why I'm more fond of this fic than many other in the Overlord fanfiction archive. The romance tag gives me faint hope since this is a child of Albedo and Momonga, it implies that the guy finally took responsibility and reciprocated her love for him. I'm pretty sure he still internally screams more than usual when it comes to her and his son. So yeah, this seems to be a beginning of a good fanfic, so good luck it. |
me chapter 1 . 11/16/2016 I liked almost as much as the first one. The hilarity that awaits! While I imagne Demiurge would be beyond pleased, I cannot begin to imagine how Cocytos reacted to the news of the heir. Is the little one goig to have a sibling? I'd have thought Shalltear wouldn't take this standing when they're both willing to belong to the same man... undead... whatever our pal is. hope to see where this goes, it has great potential |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2016 The diabetes, the delicious diabetes ! |