Reviews for Derailment
Guest chapter 7 . 7/22
one person only? what about polyamorous relationships
Kasolai chapter 46 . 7/18
Please dont abandon this story.
dheathking4821 chapter 46 . 5/20
Will this continue ?
Dr Freaky chapter 46 . 4/12
I really wish this didn’t end because I love this so much
Guest chapter 46 . 3/1
Lol I want to see the wedding
SlagarCruel2 chapter 46 . 2/28
I would really like for this story as well as The Conspiracy and Old Arrangements to continue soon please! All three are on my top twenty favorite fanfictions list!
Marfel chapter 46 . 1/31
Please update I love love love this story so much
Nina Arevalo chapter 46 . 1/25
please up date this story soon. I really would appreciate it if you do. I really want to know what happens next.
nightmane chapter 10 . 1/6
I'd like to point out but most hospital rooms come equipped with cameras, specially personal one's to monitor any wrong doings and well...How long was that mammal able to watch their 'little' show they put on.
Specter56 chapter 46 . 12/19/2019
Did the author Zanrok pass on ? Is that why this story halts at a point that counting actual story words and subtracting them from the fluff associated words already written then factoring in the authors love of non-story associated fluff. That means this story is incomplete by another 65K worth of story words and 350K of attached fluff.
Or possibly did the Author figuer that FANFIC was a waste of time ?
If there is a completed version of this story to be found somewhere.. Please tell.
The story itself is worth the read. You just have to continuously step over and around fluff to follow it.
My Condolences if the Author actually did pass.
Michaela Rose Cameron chapter 46 . 11/4/2019
I loved this and can’t wait for more!
Muxeum chapter 46 . 10/12/2019
God damn that was so cute! 3 w...wait don't let her hear that I'm sorry ;_;
Nina Arevalo chapter 1 . 8/19/2019
Hey zanrok please up date your storys i really love your storys. I am reading Old Arrangenents and rereading this story again. love the Way you Wright
seakard chapter 9 . 8/15/2019
Rereading this story (yet again) but I'm sorry, I CAN'T keep Me Big Mouth SHUT this time. I, no matter HOW I feel about someone, never have, Do Not Now, and NEVER WILL allow myself to be FORCED into anything. I would have taken that "Marriage Certificate" and SHREDDED it. Told Bogo to tell the Mayor that, no matter WHAT he believes/wants/NEEDS PoliTICKally, I will NOT be FORCED into marriage, ESPECIALLY as it was for "PoliTICKal" usage! That I was DRUGGED Against My Will, I was NOT in control of myself, I had NO Choice in the matter, I WILL NOT ACCEPT the Marriage Papers! AND that WHEN I ask her on a date, then further dates, and IF we Both STILL, want to, THEN, and ONLY THEN we will get married, and Not Before then! "Rules" and "Customs" be DAMNED! I would rather LEAVE the city all together bare neked rather than be coerced/Railroaded/ORDERED into something that I was NOT Ready for! And as far as going into the police academy would go, FORGET IT if I had to work under a WEAK BIGOTED SPECIEST FOOL like BOGO! BUT, that's just Me, a stubborn, brick headed, Iron Backed old Ragin Cajun! Shoots, I'd rather go to Prison than be RAMMED into marriage, no matter How Much I loved the woman! And honestly, I've know people who fell into the LIE of "Love at First Sight!" As Soon as they got a better "Look" at/into the other person, they realized that "I can't STAND the SIGHT of them, LET ME OUTTA HERE!" But, Again, that's just "me" being ME! Have a good un!
ebolson chapter 46 . 7/27/2019
Hey Zanrok, been here since the start and have greatly enjoyed rereading this story. It’s nice to see you branching out and writing more stories, Old Arrangements is personally one of my favorites. That said I would like to see you come back and finish this story, preferably by having them catch the backers and win the court case.
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