Thanks SO much for coming back! How's about Allen gets glasses stolen by a Mankey in the next chapter? Happy anniversary to this story.

Omg your back

I like how you wrote the battle scenes. It feels like I'm watching a battle from the animeヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ

There are some grammar mistakes and places where you can improve the wording.

For example, "as it spun a whole three-hundred-sixty degrees." In this part, I couldn't tell if Litten was doing a somersault, a barrel roll, or something else.

There's no quick solution to figuring out the right words to use, so you should keep reading novels and learning new wordsू･ω･ )

I how she gets her first ribbon soon

Looks like Cindy got herself a rival in heather

Ooooh! Cindys first contest is about to start

Oh no! Team skull is back

Cooool! Stephanie caught the rowlet

Oh boy Stephanie's mother is going to be liiiivid when she discovers her daughter left

Poor Stephanie

I liked that chapter

Ryan is such a stuck up jerk

That awesome that Cindy picked Litten as her first Pokémon

I can't wait to see how Cindy and allen's adventure plays out

Interesting plotline with Iilma's cavern, I was wondering what you'd do with it. But if Team Skull is planning to take advantage of the whole trial system, then that means more trouble!

Good chapter as always!