Can you make more chapters? I really want to know what happens when branch wakes up the next morning!

AAAWW

Been away from the site a long time... Anyway, good you are continuing this!

-ThePokemonTroll21

This story is overall quite charming and a fun read, but you separate chapters like you would paragraphs and that's just...well it's hard to read. Chapter 6 was two lines! Don't do that. You could have easily fit all seven of these into one chapter, then started the next with the party. A different event. Something worth starting a new chapter about. Elaborate on some things, flesh it out. Describe Branch's trip to get the berries! Details are important and you have far too few.

It's also against the rules (or was the last I looked) to write in script format. At any rate, for a story, it's just unprofessional and any author here can do better. It doesn't even look as nice as proper story format. Don't do:

Branch: That was hard

Poppy: Wow you're a mess

Try instead:

"That was hard" Branch sighed, flexing his sore hands. "Not stressful, at least." (Sighs because he's tired and sore hands because you said some berries were hard to pull. Stress free and not stressful are the same thing and one sounds better in a sentence.)

"Wow" Poppy blinked. "You're a mess." (She's slightly surprised to see him in this state. Blinking is a good way to get that across.)

I am not trying to be rude or to flame you and I sincerely hope that's not how it came across. I'm trying to help. Constructive criticism. Happy writing!

Hey you guys, leave the writer alone. They don't have to update all the time. They have lives you know and you never know what they are going through in their personal lives. I'm a well known writer myself and I don't get this disrespect from my fans. So I expect you to do the same. Be patient. There are plenty of Broppy fanfics out there. By the way, to you writer, I love your story! It's great keep up the good work!

I don't like it at all

I LOVE IT A LOT XD

good fic plz continue

why so short? are you even trying to write this?
Oh, by the way youre not updating this sooo can I continue it? Tell me through PM or comment on my story.

Update please, really please

So... are you actually writing this, or is it just some stunt?

Ok can't wait for the first chapter

Um...

You do realize that there is only one word written here, right?