Love it

good story so far

You know, that "Powerful character did some little magic/action and collapses. End of the chapter." trope is irritating like hell.

awesome story cant wait for new chapters

It should be how powerful is Harry's Guild anyway? Not who powerful. Great story so far.

Hope you update! This is good!

Not sure if this was intentional or not, but the among of fan service in this chapter has made me completely rite off this fic. Good luck, you'll need it.

this was a good chapter to read and wonder what happens next.

awesome chapter now this is what i call a massive beat down riser never stood a chance anyway really looking forward to reading your next chapter

Okay, what the hell just happened the next morning?

My biggest question at this point, is what makes this 'Harry Potter' and not just some oc?

A great start! I loved the fighting scenes, however you Hyped Hadrian's fighting skills too much. If I look at this, Harry can barely fight a low Fallen Angel, while he is a Draconis, a member of one of the strongest Mythical Species.

So, I do hope you have a good excuse for it. After all, training and killing more than 100 years and obtaining a fearful title, I would have expected more. You should understand that what you describe here in this chapter that certain readers, Like me have some expectations. High Expectations.

On Another Note, please DON'T make this MalexMale! Not my thing, and it is dammit hard to find a straight story.