AUGH MY HEART. No seriously ouuuuuuch. This was pitch-perfect, so much so that I had trouble reading it. Allelujah's voice was achingly on-point, and Tieria was just right too. I really like the way you wrote in all the little flinches and gestures, those really made it for me. But just...heaven help me, the moment Tieria realizes that Allelujah didn't know that it wasn't Neil, everything about that was so well done, especially how Tieria keeps getting more insistent, in tone and volume. It's just right and I love it. The end scene with Lyle was really cathartic, too, but also in-character-Lyle's still nasty about being mistaken for Neil, but he's not a complete jerk in the end. And Allelujah's figuring out how to relate to that. Which is just...good. Very very good, and I am pleased. In conclusion, this was amazing.