You are a seriously good writer. But I have to say, this one was not one of your best works. It was very predictable and as your biggest fan, I only wish for you to get better and better. But I found the story rather amusing! That laser part didn't make sense but it does justify the story's title, so I'm gonna let it slide. Keep writing please :D

This is truly one of the best short stories I have ever read. You have perfectly depicted the nature & emotions of all the characters. This is a true masterpiece of literature. You are one heck of a Genius!

That was a great little story. I never thought of using the Mirror World again, it was just in that one-off episode and things like that tend to slip from memory, so kudos for your ingenuity.

It was all really sweet in the end. The interactions Serena had with the mirror gang, especially Ash, were something to behold. The direction taken with him and the main world Serena threw me for a loop honestly, and I’m definitely one who loves being surprised, and delighted, with that ending.

I commend your story-telling. You dressed up and breathed new life into a shipping that is becoming stale. The whole process felt natural and the set-up was not rushed. Serena's character development and Ash's reaction at the end was fluid and was not contrived as so many similar stories are. The length was right too. You didn't needlessly carry-on or tarry with details, but also did not rush the plot. Despite syntax errors, it was still easy to read. All in all, I enjoyed this story. Thank you.

(smiles) seems like you've written a touching amourshipping fanfic, serena and ash make a perfect couple, great job dude and as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

NAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

Yea serna found her way home and she and ash finally kissed and are boyfriend and girlfriend along least

I adore the story, keep it up!

but that guest reviewer though...

you know, the [smiles] guy...

always gets on my nerves

Wow...please keep writing! I am loving this story so much!

seems like serena is really getting under ash's skin big time (giggles) seems like you've did a very excellent job on writting this amourshipping chapter, congrats dude and as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

(smiles) seems like a very touching moment, great job dude on this spicy and sweet amourshipping chapter, as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

(gasp) this was shocking what was with the mirror, yet it seems like things in this amourshipping chapter just gotten more curious and its getting very interesting, great job dude and as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

Hmm, I wonder how this will turn out.

Wow. This is nice. Thanks, and keep it up. I'll watch for a update. Thank you, again, for the sheer quality of this. Stay sharp, write on! -Hart

(smiles) my my looks like a great amourshipping chapter. i hope we all get to see serena and ash get married together in the future as husband and wife in the pokemon series and beyond. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.