| Reviews for The Magus Among Ninjas |
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   Xyanth chapter 12 . 7/28 I love this story so much. hope it gets an update soon |
| ilikecoffee chapter 12 . 7/24 more please i like the story you can do it |
| Shifuru chapter 6 . 7/17 A musket...a freaking musket. Nope, just nope. Too many repercussions in introducing such weapons at this time period. This really threw me off. Just, no. Sorry. |
| MetalBatt chapter 12 . 7/12 Shirou is ACTUALLY Jesus in this world, holy...! I knew his powers might have been advantageous in some scenarios, but not like this! I wouldn't even be surprised if he's fully able to summon Noble Phantasms like Excalibur without endangering his life like usual. This shit is crazy, and I'm fully strapped in for the adventure :D! P.S. If Shirou will ever sign a summoning contract, then it HAS to be with a Dragon! If only to commemorate his Servant, and fit with the whole 'Heroic' aspect of this story :). |
| lmc9389 chapter 12 . 7/11 Hope you continue |
| Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 12 . 6/21 Do you're a fellow Canadian hey? Nice |
| SketchPlan chapter 10 . 6/2 You know that "Divided we fall, united we stand" I heard a song "Yesterday's dream" that has the same tone "Together we stand, divided we fall" |
| endlesstrial chapter 11 . 5/15 "he then pulled some sort of chocolate syrup from sealing scroll..." wasn't shirou's chakra can't be used for sealing? like... boom or something? |
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/8 Well, this is something. Didn't read chapters 1- 10 only 11-12, but so far this is good. The previous chapters will remain a mystery for sure, but it's fine. This story has a lot of potential. You said. ''Thanks for reading!'' I say, ''Thanks for writing.'' |
| pointy chapter 12 . 5/7 Boring. just to kill 1 girl need to wait 2 month and what all those rant meant? Even on 200th chapter wont make MC pass puberty, just count waiting time perchapter |
| huongdaoroma chapter 12 . 5/5 Oh shit, scary Shirou Love it! |
| StoryReiter chapter 12 . 5/5 Hehehe Mei is right, Kiri is a den of psychopaths, the Shinobi World even more so, but Shirou is a different kind of pyschopath on the opposite end of the spectrum. In this place Yagura is under Obito/Madara's genjutsu. Seeing Shirou here would either raise alarms or pretty match screw Shirou over since he has no defenses against that. Not yet anyway but Shirou is anything but stupid, dense he may be at times. He just doesnt care. I just realized that at kill or be killed environments Shirou Emiya who is determined and has walked through hell after the Grail War is a different beast and man altogether. Archer has been an incomprehensible madlad helping at hell with people misinterpreting his reasons. Shirou has learned from Archer being a different man of a diffrent path altogether although similar in ideals. Truly an oddity but a change with good intentions. Shirou is right and Im really glad to see him do smartly rather than diving head first. Thanks for updating and returning. Congratulations on your book. Take care and have a great day author. God Bless |
| mordicus18 chapter 12 . 5/2 What a great chapter. This cold and merciless shirou was AWESOME, i was afraid he would had spared all of them, just frightning them, let them run away and so playing the hero. Aren't the poor beggers freak the hell out after shirou's magic demonstration? Some of them thought bloodline users were monsters and with shirou and his magic thingy killing and rotting someone in one go, wont they be proven right? I miss the uzumakis, i wonder what are they doing now, maybe you could write a little paragraphe about them in addition to shirou's campaign anti-terror? |
| mikelz0426 chapter 7 . 5/1 You somehow found a way to incorporate the excited feeling of seeing an innovation in Dr. Stone with the awe inspiring power of the heroes of the Nasu verse into an awesome Naruto package. I love it! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/1 Hey. Just wanted to say ''Thanks for writing this''. :) |
