This was such a great story and I loved the character development in this I think it’s so beautiful. I love all of ur other Supergirl stories as well. I hope u make a sequel to this because I think it’s a great story (Lena would be great if you could write her in but I see how it might be difficult seeeing as she just moved away and it’s ur choice so do what u think is right, or like don’t do it it’s ok idm. And I’m not saying write Lena in or don’t write at all I’m saying it’s ur choice to write her in as it is ur choice to never write again. And I’m not saying I wouldn’t care if u never wrote again I do it’s just it’s ur choice and I respect it but please do write more because u have soul and u have TALENT AND I LOVE IT! anyway chile so. Bye

Technically, it isn’t reading her mind. J’onn is entering it, and Kara can make images appear for him by thinking enough. :P

Ears pierced I don’t do well with needles so no tatts if I wasn’t deftly afraid of needles my dream tat would be the House of El symbol/ Lighting bolt with the triforce wings on my back and a small (Rock people from legend of Zelda) symbol on my wrist

I like both if that’s possible but I see DC is doing a better job with the Women superheros then MCU...my fave is Storm and Wolverine and Supergirl

To read a story where a little alien is actually hurt and then pull through with the support of her new family is so emotional (I think other writers avoid these kind of things). It feels so real. You are a wonderful writer, I give you that. Awesome!

I am actually crying please continue this fic

This story could use a sequal

This coils actually use a sequal

Getting your ears pierced is okay but if you get a tattoo and you don't like it...

Hats!

okay wouldn't it be cool if our TV Kara popped in accidentally to this Earth after jumping Earth. And she realizes that "Oh there's one of me already here." Can we have that sequel?

This is amazing btw.

Your work in magnificent! I cannot imagine the dedication it must have taken you considering that you stated you wrote this during college! And you interwove the characters from the actual tv show in such a unique and original manner, rendering very different plot compared to the typical ones most fanfics have!

Thank you very much for taking your time and effort to share a wonderful fic!

Having said that, I do certainly hope that there is a sequel! Especially after hearing Lena's letter. I also love this dynamic between Kara and Alex. I'd like to see more from that perspective. And hopefully Kara will find Lena? And Maybe eventually she will tell Winn?

All in all, it's a great piece and I'm seriously keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel!

This was a great story! I love this AU. I hope you keep up the good work with your other stories!

I have just read this entire thing. Thank you so much for posting it! I can't wait to read more of your work, it's amazing.

This was such a lovely story! Something I have always wanted to read as a scenario. Of an adult Alex being entrusted with a child Kara. And u wrote a truly wonderful interpretation of that theme! I really enjoyed reading this!