This is beautiful.

I want to like Albus but he seems so petty in Cursed Child. I felt for Scorpius, who had real problem with the rumors about his parentage and Astoria passed away, and then Albus constantly made it about himself and not Scorpius.

A cute and simple story.

The Crimson Mage.

aww this is cute 3

I wish Harry told him that he's half-Sytherin, that if not for prejudices and Hagrid's and Ron's influence, he'd have ended up there. I think that what you did, make Albus feel loved and cared of, it's more important to repair their father-son relationship, but, I dunno, I think it would be nice if Harry (also in cannon) confessed that. One of Albus' main family issues is that he feels like the black sheep of a Gryffindor family, and showing him that his father could have been a Slytherin like him, that people aren't divided in Houses and that you can be more than one at the same time, would be a relief for him.
But the thing here is that he feels less loved than his siblings, so maybe that's not necessary.
Anyway, I loved this. Albus' emotions felt so real. I actually can understand him like I had to endure the same as him (I didn'tI'm, literally, like Lily: girl with two elder brothers). I can't say if this is well-written or not because, you see, I don't really speak English, but it seemed good enough to me.
Great job!

This was amazing! Truly amazing! I had tears in my eyes, but I was also smiling the whole time. It was everything I asked for and so much more! Thank you so much for writing this, it was amazing! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Locking his eyes onto Albus' own hazel eyes
Albus was the only child who had Harry’s green eyes.