Sasuke figured out that Naruto hates him for taking his dream girl.

Since Sasuke got zero punishment, your story automatically qualifies as a worthless pile of shit. 0/10. Don’t waste time reading. It’s another story that makes zero sense and has completely unrealistic people. Idiotic writer.

where is the next chapter of this story please let me know

Yup can’t wait for more of this

Love this fic and can’t wait to see more but I have tou point out a Guan Dao or yanyuedao as it is properly called is a chinese weapon. The Japanese equivalence would be a naginata. Guan Dao having the appearance of a Chinese broadsword mounted on the end of a pole where as a Naginata takes the look of a katana or similarly shaped sword also on the end of a pole. Naginatas pole is traditionally wood where as Guan Dao can be either wood or metal.

love it more please.

Great story ! Plz finish it

Naruto is pathetic

Kiba ressemble à naruto donc Hinata fait et a fait un transfert.
Sinon à part cela jaime.

ok so... this is bad. Naruto goes nuts but only manages to kill weakass kabuto. Then doesn't even fucking kill uchiha when he's LAUGHING at Jiraiya being killed?

Fucks sake just fucking tell them Orochimaru killed sasuke, make up some sacrificial bullshit, whatever. But letting him come back safe and sound, then going all angsty emo about it? YOU didn't fucking kill sasuke now you're all butt hurt to be in the same village with him?

Not to mention how ridiculous it is he's even free, healthy and still a ninja.

please update immediately

So where do I buy my own Shadow action figures?

I'll take the one with the two giant swords. lol

Have to agree to with earlier review. One of the biggest turnoffs for me when it comes to your stories is the punctuation is atrocious at worstneeds serious improvement at best. The Ideas sound good in the summaries but dullpoorly executed when you get actually reading it

The premise is really interesting. But the fucking punctuation and grammar is so trash

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.