Reviews for Happy Beginning |
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Guest chapter 8 . 9/1 I enjoyed the authors note and yes I'm 2020 I'm reading I really appreciate it and this story works amazingly your very gifted |
huskysharky7 chapter 8 . 9/1 Like I said your very talented thank you created an account just just for this one |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/24 I cried this is something special |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23 Your freaking amazing thank you |
Ryta Watari chapter 23 . 8/25 I give this fic an 8/10, I took two points off of my rating because your grammar/punctuation is a little bit iffy in some areas. Besides the aforementioned grammatical errors, I don't think that there was anything wrong with this story at all. No plot holes (that I identify as of right now), nobody was too ooc, and it was for the most part, a very smooth read. I really do hope to read another Future Diary fic from you some day, even if its just a one shot story. (To be honest, this is literally the best Future Diary fic on this website, and anybody who read it would be able to tell how much time and effort that you put into it. Good job!) -Ryta Watari |
Vercingetorix1234 chapter 20 . 4/2 You really treated the original Yuno unfairly in this fic, basically ignoring all the character development she got in the series. And all this just to inject some cheap artificial conflict into what could have been an opportunity to see Yuki and Yuno's relationship progress. |
FSRD chapter 23 . 2/23 Thank you for this great fic. |
Zeduck chapter 23 . 6/13/2019 Oh my god Seems like you wrote an entire story right in that chapterr buddy just sayin i mean im kinda mad you didnt continue but i understand why but ome thing thats been bugging me... ***no lemons?*** |
Guest chapter 19 . 6/13/2019 Well if you put in so much effort to write this then the least i can do is enjoy it! Itadakimasu! :D |
Guest chapter 14 . 6/13/2019 Hurting yuno is hurting me why u do dis |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/13/2019 Waht about... 2 yunos? :lenny: |
Guest chapter 10 . 6/13/2019 wait a sec all this stuff is hurting my brain now that im actually trying to think about it... |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/13/2019 god fucking dammit i need sleep why are you making me read this STAHP ITS TOO GOODDDDD sorry I forgot to review on the chapters before, i couldnt stop reading! |
CarricStormwind chapter 23 . 2/4/2019 You’ve done a very good job on this. I’m glad that you left an outline of what would happen if you continued it instead of just leaving it with an open ending when you got tired of it. This is the first time I’ve seen that. Again, good job. |
Moneytrees chapter 4 . 1/10/2019 Yooooooo I thought I was the only one who was thinking that concerning the whole thing. Just because Yuno has her 1st world’s incarnation’s memories doesn’t make her 1st world Yuno. Nor does that make her 2nd world Yuno who was supposed to be with 2nd world Yuki. Which confuses me about 1st world Yuno too when 1st world Yuki died how would 2nd world Yuki suffice? He isn’t 1st world Yuki. You don’t have the person you love just a copy. Hey just shows that with life you don’t get second chances baby. Live it with no regrets, Now to the story, yo this is really good! I’ve just started but I already like where it’s heading! Characters are pretty good no feeling of them being ooc and I like the way you’re telling the story! Writing style is pretty sufficient as well too. |