And another unfinished story...why are there so many of thosePlsss think about updating it... i absolutely loved reading it, great story so far!

I am guessing the story is not going to be updated anymore. That's a shame, as it has been enjoyable to read up to this point. Glad I could read these chapters. I hope you guys are all doing well in these uncertain times.

J'adore.

I forgot about this until just now. Great plot. Love Yamcha! Videl is supper obsessive. Curious how this will come to a head. Hopefully you update soon!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing this.

Videl hissing to her bf gohan dammit gohan I see that you don t trust me with your secret identity gohan to videl stop saying that I don t trust you of course i trust you videl i love you sigh you win i am sayianman please don t tell anyone

I haven't really read a Gohan/Videl story in a long time, so it was nice to see that I was able to still enjoy this type of story.

Well this is an interesting story

I really liked this chapter. I can feel Gohan's not going to keep his secrets for much longer, and I'm anxious to see how you're going to handle that.

It's funny, I may have donated the story idea, but the end result is absolutely nothing like what I had in mind when I got the idea.

Good chapter. Erasa's scene was well done, and I liked her insight. She gave Videl an explanation that made a lot of sense. I enjoy their friendship in this fic.

I was surprised that Gohan would spar with Vegeta, but in this context, you've managed to make it plausible.

Videl's encounter with Yamcha was interesting and amusing. I liked how she didn't deny right away of being a baseball fan just so he could let her in, and how he kept interrupting her when she's trying to explain her presence.

Minor gripes: in the description of a photo she found of the 21st tournament, you wrote that Yamcha had scars on his face, but he only got them before the 23rd tournament. And in the photo where the woman with "oddly colored hair" (although in DB blue isn't an odd hair color) is trying to ignore "the wandering eyes of an old man", I assume the old man is Roshi... but Roshi wears sunglasses, so how can you see his wandering eyes?

Anyway, it's just little details I can't help knowing from having read and re-read the DB manga more times than I can count.

It may just be me, but I was a little disappointed by Gohan's reaction at seeing footage of his dad as a kid, fighting in the tournament. I mean, okay, he's a little nervous that Videl is showing him this when he's trying to pretend he knows nothing about martial arts, but this is his dad, as a kid, in a video I'm pretty sure he had never seen. I would've thought he would've had sparkles in his eyes, seeing this fight, and at the same time trying to hide how he feels about it.

Goten's timing in the scene was good, especially since they were watching Goku as a kid. I like how Videl tries to fight her suspicious nature, and the documentary was a good idea. Good thing Chichi (kind of) lied and didn't say her sons did know martial arts. More like, she twisted the truth.

Although, now that I think about it, after Goku passed, it was mentioned that Chichi wasn't the same and she was even the one who taught Goten martial arts, and since this documentary was done after Goku died, well, it doesn't add up... Ah well, it's fanfiction, so taking liberties is allowed. But be more careful of the facts in the future.

I will add that I thought that interviewer was quite tactless with Chichi.

Great chapter, it’s good to see this story updating again.

thanks a lot for updating this awesomenes

Can you update trivial matters

Haha, love it. Keep it up!