Hey bro don’t listen to those who are trying to bring you down your story’s are great and pls remember that keep doing what you love and never let anyone stop you just keep doing what you love
P.S.I love your story’s I have read every one you wrote and I can’t wait for the next chapter for this one

Is it perfect? D-ebatable
Is it interesting? -Yes
What will you be if if you delete this story? -A stupid idiot.
Honestly dude you are the author, you steer the plot if I don't like it well I can read another story if someone doesn't like it well let them try to make one.
Nothing is perfect neither the original Naruto or SAO were perfect, this is for entertaining purposes, if a reader can't take it easily and enjoy it for what it is then they really need to reconsider their priorities

You know... you can delete the guest reviews that are nothing but dickish behaviour, like that arrogant "Ohma Revive". Ohma, if you're so superior, why haven't I ever heard of you before now? Oh, that's right, because you're not superior to anyone. You're just someone who gets off on flaming people anonymously, because you're too afraid to sign in and leave that review that way. It's easy to be mean behind a veil of anonymity, but it's far better for your karma, when your afterlife rolls around, if you're kind behind that veil of anonymity. After all, "do unto others, as you would have done unto you". This is why I don't truly flame people. I air out my grievances in a calm manner, even if the tone could be taken badly.

Maybe if you actually wrote great stories instead of these horrible stories, that you’re too deluded to think they’re actually great, then the critics would leave a review.

But we both know you stories are horrible to the point that not even the unbiased critics would want to leave a review for your horrible stories~! LMAO

From one of your superiors,

Ohma Revive (of SpaceBattles)

The story is quite interesting so far. I really want to see what happens next. Keep up the great work boss!

Goddamn this is great

i like it please write more

Kind of feels like Naruto is that weird emo kid that refers to himself as demon blade and is just living through a delusion that he's the best lol.

Would you keep the stories up at least even if you decide not to continue updating them.

maybe it's because I'm a KiriSachi fan, but I would have rewrote the part where Sachi dies because it was dispensable.

when two authors tell you that Reiki decided to kill Sachi only to avoid that he didn't want her to become a rival of Asuna, you already know that the story will not necessarily be good.

this is one of the reasons i dislike Canon Sao. because it was bad and terrible writing on Reiki's part to kill her because nothing was forcing him to do so.

Sao was his first work and he had no writing experience at the time.
I understand better why he wrote Sao Progressive lol.

in his place I would have let Sachi live and joined Kirito's harem...and I would have done the same in your story.

I would have other points to address but Sachi's death is one of the major criticisms I have towards this story.

finally your story shrugs. good continuation.

isnt this naruto way to extreme.

While I may not like Sword Art Online as an anime/light novel, I do like what you are doing in this story. My only real issue with this chapter was how awkward some of the sentences felt. I assume that the AI is using Naruto as a basis and test model to create a boss or perfect killer for the game. If that is the case then I would like to see how far it will go. I would also like to see what changes have been made to the game's mechanics in response to this. I hope to see more in the future.

As far as the other stories go,this one is still pretty good and I find it interesting that you would link dot hack to sword art. I mean I made that earlier like dot hack was a smaller version of sword art for only one character that couldn't log out.

I like your other stories that I have read and favorited, but tend to ignore any flamers and look for the good ones. I wish I could help give ideas, but I don't have any to give for you.

I hope everything is good for you both. I do read the author notes every once in a while. Anyway I hope this review makes your day a bit brighter.

Really hope this won't get the chop, one of my fav stories from you. Thanks for the chapter, it was really fun!

It was fine till he started talking in status. Then I started getting bored. Good hunting