This was hard to read cuz of what was done to Kaiba... but there was a raw synergy to this fic that made it utterly mind-blowing! It's interesting that Kaiba so instinctively trusts Yami... and I think you showed a slightly new side to Yami... a warrior. He's always been courageous and strong and powerful and kind and wise, but reading this made me realize that he did grow up in a much more savage time than now and... he would've had to be trained as a warrior. It's odd. I wonder if you'll ever consider writing a sequel? One where Yami, preferably, has his own body? I've always wondered if that slight, lithe body could fight? Would ancient times even have martial arts? I know that was a random question, but I'm curious. I'm sorry if I'm being too pushy, and asking silly stuff, but you are a phenomenal writer and I'm an avid lover of your fics!

Wonderful story. Yami was awesome in this.

I am glad Seto was rescued and is safe. They both need love. Yami is his safe and love for both of hem.

Poor Seto. I am glad that Bakura helped to find him. They may see some Yami type darkness soon. I really like this. Stay strong and keep on staying strong.

phew. This was so thrilling to read, I wouldn't be able to stop in between. So well done... The end came way to fast, would be nice if there was a sequel :p
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Hathor-samaaaaaa *bites in a pillow* why are you so gooooood