Reviews for Veiled
Luesi chapter 7 . 12/18/2018
I really miss this story. Obi was by far, my fav character in the original, and seeing a story like this made me really happy. I understand if it's just that you have a real life, but I hope one day it can get updated again!
believergirl62 chapter 1 . 6/20/2018
I really like this story, and I like that you added the twist to the story by using magic, but staying pretty accurate to the original story line.
Miraculouslyawsome chapter 1 . 10/23/2017
Update soon
Angel chapter 6 . 6/30/2017
I've really enjoyed this fan fiction, I always felt bad for Obi since he seemed like he was in an unrequited love situation with Shirayuki, and now he has a partner! Please update soon!
21Faces chapter 6 . 6/1/2017
This was a really nice chapter. I also loved the fact that you quoted Shakespeare.
WolfyGirl chapter 6 . 5/3/2017
Why not wright it sooner?
Stuntman W chapter 5 . 3/20/2017
Very very good I can't wait for more :)
Yukichi730 chapter 4 . 2/23/2017
Love the story so far, especially with the twist of magic! can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2017
I love this story please update soon
mutemuia chapter 4 . 1/30/2017
I'm curious about this Clarines you wrote. It's the same we know but different. This background of magic let you a lot of twists of plots. Looking forward to your next.
jonica77 chapter 4 . 1/27/2017
Cool! I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon! Your oc is interesting.