Reviews for A New Day
Dianne060807 chapter 3 . 4/18/2018
Update please
kai-baekyun98 chapter 3 . 4/9/2018
love this story can't wait to read more
Bella-swan11 chapter 3 . 12/23/2016
Jaime, you have to do the right thing, if you're going to kill the king. Then do the right thing, you have to save Elia and her children.
He thinks Lyarra would be proud of you. Because you would prove the great man you are. Besides that they are innocent, you know that your father is able to send them to kill the royal family.
Talk to Varys, tell him what your father would do. Tell her to send Elia and her children to Essos. For the sake of the Targaryen family they must survive, that you will take care of the king.
waterlily91 chapter 3 . 12/20/2016
I like this story and your new character. I like how she's making Jaime have second thoughts about Cersei. It's sad she had to see her family's death like that. I hope for happiness in her future.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2016
You really need to proof-read before posting. This chapter is full of spelling mistakes, and grammar mistakes. I couldn't get through this chapter, the mistakes were way too distracting.
LadyRedStar chapter 2 . 12/11/2016
This is a good start! I can't wait to see how things change with Lyarra!