so good. hope you update soon

awesome fic.

Im glad they are finally opening to eaxh other, I hope it makes them closer. And I hope too you make Dany stronger she is so different from the show , it seems to me she is like a girl here while in the show she is more confident and brave ,

It's very hard to read because of the sentence structure. For instance, it should be: "In exchange for what?" asked Lady Lyanna Mormont. In another paragraph: Lord Celwyn called out saying, "We of the North..."

Really enjoyed that chapter and still love the story. Only a few hours till Episode 3 and can't wait for them to meet. I'm a big fan of those two. Wolf and Dragon. But one is both while the other is only Dragon.

Please thay have to tell the each other their real feelings so the romance and happiness can begin.

This is fantastic! Cant wait for more! :)

I'm liking this story. It started a little sloppy in my opinion. In the first couple chapters it was hard to understand sometimes which characters were conversing, but each chapter is getting progressively better and I'm looking forward to more. Please update!

My only real complaints are that Jon's heritage still hasn't come out. There have been enough moments in your story where his heritage should already be suspected especially by Daenerys since Jon is apparently already riding the dragons. Also I didn't understand how much Daenerys seemed to like Daario. She has never been shown to be emotionally interested in him in the show.

I'm wondering what our lord and savior Jon Snow does next.

Great update! Lovely chapter. They're making connection :)
Finally we will see them together. I can't wait for tonight.

too many comparison's between jon and the past men in her life it's not fair to not trying to read paragraphs about drogo or daario other wise good chapter

Hope you update soon again if you're continuing this story.

Love this story. Totally ship these two together.

I absolutely love this

Good! Now I need them to be together!

I'm so in love with this fic!