Wait. So this is a parody right? Right?! So that means Tobirama and Shika are still a thing on the original, yes? Please tell me it is! I'm so torn between angry and sad! Author-san please give us a happy romantic ending! In fact I don't care if one of them dies as long as they love each other publicly forever I will die happy!

Oh man. Poor Shika just keeps stumbling into bigger and bigger issues huh?

Oh man. Poor Shika just keeps stumbling into bigger and bigger issues huh?

Thank you for updating! I think one thing you could write a little more on is Shika’s gender dysphoria. It was emphasized a lot in the first few chapters, but I think adding little details here and there will add to the story. I also feel like Shikamaru acts ooc in some places, like when he’s talking to Tobirmara. But I do like how you added to his character. Please keep up the great work! And hopefully update on Black Parade?

I ship them so badlyyyyyy

Awweee that One-Shot was kind of sweet, so that would be how their life will be in the future eh? Poor Tobirama got rejected from Shikari though that is exactly the kind of character she has huh?
Also enjoyed her bantering with Madara and how she thinks abput a lot of differnet occupations like smithing or sewing xD
Her reminisce about Naruto & co. from her past/future was also beautiful to read.
Nevertheless looking to the contuniation of this story .

THIS CHAPTER— really made me laugh out loud and I also had bittersweet feelings. Everything that was implied in this chapter had my eyes widening and well, I connected most of the dots I think.

Is the story finished? If so, thank you for all your hard work and although I wasn’t expecting this one shot ending chapter; I’m glad you wrote it instead of discontinuing or anything. Really, thank you.

This quote: “At this rate you will actually die of worry and burn yourself out, and then you won't be able to perform at your best, which I am well aware just how much you hate. You need to stop worrying about every little thing before they take control of your emotions and thoughts. It's unhealthy” —- THIS quote really hit me in the feels and I needed to hear this. Man...your new chapters from both this story and “The Black Parade” are too relatable now.

I love the flow of how you wrote everything and the characterization of everyone made sense. Wasn’t expecting there to be love but it made things more light hearted. And I definitely love her conversations with Madara.

Another aspect I really love is Shikamaru’s confession to his past life’s precious people. I’m really impressed with your writing style in this. The quotes at the ending were a nice touch and I LOVE the last paragraph you wrote.

Again, yes I love the last paragraph because it’s so relatable: “Things get broken, and sometimes they get repaired, and in most cases, you realize that no matter what gets damaged, life rearranges itself to compensate for your loss, sometimes wonderfully.” - I think I should frame this quote and read it whenever I feel down haha.

Thank you for the update. I wish to read more but it’s totally understandable if this is the last chapter.

P.S: Is Tori the Car the mother of Tora the Cat? Lmao

- M.C (I have an acc but it’s such a drag to reset my password and such lol it’s been years since I last logged on. I’ll be sure to favourite, follow and review both your stories when I log on! These hidden gem stories deserve all the love the world!)

wait, is it finished?

I really liked the end bit where Shika cried. Very emotional and I did like Madara with kind of a playful personality. Solid read!

holy shit what the fuck I didn’t see the one shot part and I was really scared for a second there that Shika turned into a side supporting woman character for Tobimara WHEW.

noooooooooo not unrequited love pleaseI'm sobbing

I really liked this one shot!
It was sweet but sad in some places - it's awful that Shika couldn't get everything she wanted but at least she's with people she likes
And wow, imagine just how awful it must be to live in a world where everyone you love is gone
The end was really sweet though!

this is noncanon right

So this is not canon for your story? I’m sorry to hear that you lost your progress.

orz please Author-sama, I beg you. Please update! I can't take it anymore! The cliffhanger almost killed me, but