Good story, just enough, not too much.

This was so good! I loved it! Wouldn't mind an epilogue about how they're handling keeping it a secret

I'm putting my comment here, because you can only do one per chapter...

I hope you do A LOT of chapters in this story and not just 5-6. I really like how you have fleshed this out and would like to see your season 2 speculation.

This is REALLY good and thank you for writing it.

I really enjoyed this journey thanks for the work and thanks for sharing it.

I love your story, I love Mike and Ginny together! :)

Great chapter. Love the Bawson relationship.

He loves her.

I love your story, update soon plz! :)

Nice chapter.

Nice...

Love this fic! You have a knack for dialogue, especially men's dialogue. This is precisely what the show writers should have written for the S1 finale. You have captured the characters perfectly, and were wise to include Evelyn and Blip as trusted confidants. Wish you wouldn't limit the story to only 3 chapters. This story has potential for a long duration. Well done so far!

I am totally into this story and rooting for this couple. I can't wait. You totally have these characters down. Hungry for more!

Hot

I don't even go here and I'm loving this fic. I'm a huge Pitch fan but not a big shipper. Your fic is turning me tho. Plus I love you included Blip and Evi. This feels like a real episode of the show. I totally agree that Ginny would be skiddish as hell no matter how amazing the sex was. She holds the weight of the world on her shoulders and it would take ALOT for her to do something she feels would disappoint so many pple close to her. She has spent her life sacrificing her personal happiness for others and her baseball career. I love the angst in this story.

I don't want this story to end its so juicy!