Reviews for The Snake's mistake
Iceflame55 chapter 6 . 8/21
So, is there more players mucking about here beyond the 3rd, the Warhawk, and the Snake? I mean it COULD be the Toad Sage, but then you have Itachi.
lee2doie chapter 6 . 7/12
Oh right, Sasori also has spies in the village.
Ky111 chapter 6 . 5/23
Awesome story and I love all the intrigue. I like all the different angles that are being explored and the actions being taken after this severe incident which exposed a serious breach in security which showed Konoha to be extremely compromised and having an extreme weakness which could of lead to the end of the Village if the wrong parties had become aware of how bad the situation was before it could be corrected.

I like the angle you have Ino playing but I'm also a sucker for a Ino/Naruto pairing (it's easily my preferred) but I'm guessing this story either won't have any pairings or they're going to be taking a back of the bus seat in this story and that's also how I prefer it as I like that angle and aspect to a story, I never like them being to front and center as I prefer the action and political intrigue to take the center stage.

Interesting twist at the end of this chapter with Danzo not being responsible for these deaths but it's not surprising that many others would quickly want to clean house and remove any evidence they have been working against Konoha with the extreme security measures that have all of a sudden taken place no outside forces would be wanting to leave any traces that can lead back and be used against them. Weather they be other Villages or organisations like Orochimaru's or others.

Guessing the story title fits in for this as I'm guessing Orochimaru went to far with Naruto and has caused Konoha to react more severely than he wanted them to. Which wouldn't surprise me as in certain situations Orochimaru definitely can lack the proper impulse control at times.

Until the next one.
UnknownUserNr47 chapter 6 . 4/12
Not my usual reading material, but I like it so far.
Atryx10 chapter 6 . 3/28
yo, yo, yo, yo!
This is intriguing!
RustingKnight chapter 6 . 3/9
Maybe this Chakra defense can be the initial expression of Uzumaki Chakra chains.
I really hope koala can teach Naruto what others couldn't and that he takes sealing into interest, even though initially it would be because of paranoia.
I like more yaoi couples or none at all but this Ino that you portray... I wouldn't mind her as a couple. I know she treats him like a patient but hey, he's her First patient.
ForbiddenWitness41 chapter 6 . 3/6
Regardless of what caused this fic to be resuscitated, it is nice to see more. Naruto's reaction feels honest and makes sense given who his character was at the beginning of the series. I loved seeing more depth in Anko's character beyond KRAZY. And the cliffhanger being that Sarutobi and Danzo BOTH don't know who is striking Konaha was amazing and effective.
I hope you continue,
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CW chapter 6 . 2/26
I really love this story - very original and well written. Thank you for adding to it, can't wait for more!
Squidgod812 chapter 6 . 2/27
great chapter
TigrezzTail chapter 6 . 2/26
Hm, well it'll be interesting to see such a different side of Anko. And Danzo's surprised me as much as hiruzen. Unless of course he's lying to keep out of trouble.
SakuraKoi chapter 6 . 2/26
Wow
Lazymanjones96 chapter 6 . 2/26
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
Midoriryu chapter 6 . 2/26
I like what I've seen so far of the interaction between Anko and Naruto. Plus Koala being there added something that really aided the flow between them imo. That bit at the end, that's really got me curious.
SPark681 chapter 6 . 2/26
Hmm, interesting wonder what Danzo means anyways keep up the great work!
Mist of Rainbows chapter 6 . 2/26
It's always 'nice' when your wet-works guy says... these aren't mine...

It's nice to see Naruto get some help, Anko is a wonderful choice, mostly because she's more than a little damaged herself. Thanks for the chapter.
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