A strong Nunnally is incredible to read about.

thid is amazing

ok i am getting deja vu as if i've read this return to the royal family story plot before but with lelouch instead of Nunnally.

but it really strongly reminds me of a older fic of that nature way too closely the found by Clovis thing really sets this off.

the only thing missing is time at boot camp before a return to area 11.

my the critic in me is saying your treading too close to another fic's plotline to make me feel comfy with not enough changes to make me think your not just aping off that fic.

the only reason i haven't been more exact is that it's been ages since i read the fic i recall with this very similar plot to this one name.

Loved this story! I hope you will continue it someday :)

I like the story ok. The idea of swapping roles is interesting and I am a fan of the return to pendragon trope. However, swapping their roles seems a little pointless if you are also swapping their personalities. I think they need to be distinct characters influenced by the changes, rather than simply giving Nunnalymlelouch's role and vice versa.

Roleswap with Fem!Lelouch? This should be interesting!~

Interesting! I was a bit concerned about Lelouch’s characterization in the earlier chapters, but now it seems that prior info on her was based on Nunnally’s perceptions rather than the truth. Lelouch always was a great actor, after all. Lelouch working with Schneizel, oh dear. There are a few grammatical errors and missing words, but nothing major. I’m excited to see where this goes next!

oooh, now what could you be planning Lulu?

nice chapter, charles is still the bastard we all love, i sure she was not married due to her age, but with him I sure that little problem will return to bite.
I find this lelouch annoying, nunally had a reason to be the naive little girl she was, lelouch dont.

This story has a interesting premise. I do find t strange how passive Lelouch is being. I understand that she's basically swapped roles with Nunnally in this fic, but even by your admissions in the story, she's still a strategic genius and master manipulator. Why then is she not making use of these skills to improve the situation that she and Nunnally are in? No matter what has changed, it seems incredibly OOC that Lelouch is not doing everything in her power to assist Nunnally.

Or am I missing something and Lelouch been politicking off-screen and refusing to worry Nunnally by admitting 2 doing so? Let's say with Schneizel? I hope this is the case or the fic would be severely undermined by a terribly OOC Lelouch.

i kind of find stupid that the one keeping then alive never tell the reason why they are hidden. is kind if a cliche and a stupid one at that but hey knowing charles i sure nunally will be married forced to have kids and lelouch will be the helpless hostage that knows nothing. Sorry if it sound like a flame but right now it looks like other story I was reading and that story sometimes make me mad and now is probably abandoned.