Aaaaaa I love this story so much! I am so nervous and excited to find out what happened to make ratchet say that! Thank you for writing and posting this fantastic story!

Oh my God, this chapter put such a wide smile on my face. I loved reading this! The emotions this brought forth for me, you have no idea. Thank you for this little treasure, for this beautiful piece of writing.

Megatron is uber creepy

My poor screamy. I still want to hug him. And smack ratchet in the face. How dare he?! I still think something is amiss though...

wELL THAT WAS JUST A WAY TO LEAVE THE STORY, NOW WASNT IT?
I just binged the whole frickin thing in a couple of days between my studies and HOLY CRAP it is now one of my most favorite stories. Ever. I don't know how, but you made me ship Optimus and Starscream even though I never thought of them together before this. I don't know if they'll end up getting together or not, but I honestly don't really care. I just love the pair of them. This story really had me feeling things, both good and bad, and I absolutely love how long it is. I have so many things to say and yet nothing comes to mind. Right now, I'm really hoping Ratchet was the only one out of the entire team who decided that, without the team knowing, and the rest of the team really want Op and Star back. Because really? Yknow, I had always been kind of a fan of Ratchet. I liked him. I still really like him. Except the him from this fic. This Ratchet can go fall in a hole and think about everything he's done and feel REALLY BAD ABOUT IT because how dare he do this to Star and Op? How COULD he?! This may be harsh, but I frickin want the entire team to turn their backs on RATCHET, for Ratchet to be on his knees begging for Starscream's forgiveness and for Star not to forgive. Because Ratchet is being horrible. Ratchet sucks. Screw Ratchet. This story, though, is just amazing! Have I mentioned how much I love it? Because I love it. A lot. And I'm now sad I have to WAIT for the next update. But I want you to take as long as you need! You're amazing and you're an amazing writer! Thank you for writing this FABULOUS story! But screw Ratchet. Also, Starscrimus and Arceemus and Smokimus are all amazing. I love that they all started calling each other that. Also screw Ratchet. Did I mention screw Ratchet? Screw Ratchet. And not in a friendly "I hate that you made me like this" kinda way. I hate this Ratchet for what he just did. Screw. Ratchet. Sorry, I'm a bit hung up on that. Okay, I should probably stop writing this now. Your story's amazing! You're amazing! Can't wait to see more! Goodbye!

In Which Almost No One Does Anything To Ensure the Loyalty of the New Mech, lol. Starscream? Gonna apologize for whaling on him? Anyone but the kids going to welcome Smokescreen in? What if he gets pissed and jumps ship because the military outpost here was entirely fine with him being smacked around and then they defended the actions of the mech doing the smacking? You're gonna *lose* him!

Starscream, my mech, you're doing great. I don't understand why you're so upset that things have changed; you were trying to change things! You did good, you're accomplishing your goal! Has Megatron been telling you you're horrible and that everything you do is wrong for so long that you don't recognize success any more?
Man poor Starscream. (Also, Prime, if any of your officers learn that you offered to let someone shoot you to death then they're going to rake you over the coals.)

Did I read this entire thing in a scarily short amount of time? Yeah, and I really don't regret it because holy hell was this GOOD

Predaking and Starscream's dynamic? Wonderful. Optimus and Starscream's dynamic? Even better. I love how creepy you made Megatron too, like some of his actions made me REALLY uncomfortable and I mean that in the best way possible.

It might sound weird, but the part that had the most impact on me was Soundwave's voice turning into screams while Megatron beat him. Like maybe it's the way you described it, or the imagery that came up in my head or whatever, but that gave me CHILLS.

Anyways man, keep it up. You've got amazing writing and I can't wait to see more.

Honestly? I'm starting to really hope that whatever happened to him DID give him future sight, and he just hasn't noticed his "memories" rearranging themselves yet b/c things have been so different and because he lost his written records of the past so he doesn't have anything to check his memories against. Plus! He hasn't told anyone everything he knows yet, so they can't even look at him sideways and go 'that's... not what you said last time'.

This is very enjoyable, thanks!

MED. BAY. NOW

Welp, weird way to ask "wanna be frens" but alright

Eff you, I am bawling

F for Ratchet

MOAR FAM!

OG COLORS!
Man, that cat will be worried sick