Reviews for Christmas in the Shack
Guest chapter 7 . 3/14
I guessed it was the gnomes 3 or 4 chapters ago.
pittbuck chapter 11 . 1/31/2018
My favorite one so far!
DinoGuy2000 chapter 11 . 10/17/2017
Oh, such fun! Such adorableness! You've moved my emotions quite skillfully, as usual. Yes, certainly an enjoyable experience. I'll probably come back for a re-read around Christmas time.

Good work!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/30/2017
Bill Cipher flirting with himself. I'm not sure whether that's more funny or just plain disturbing. Or maybe it's just Bill.
SteinLOG chapter 6 . 3/8/2017
that website shit lmao if mabel caught him
WENDIP4BESTSHIP chapter 11 . 3/3/2017
The best for me out of this hole thing is when Bill is acting like he is writing some very important medical information, only to lift it up and say " Look a turkey!" but all in all. A very heartwarming tale, expertly written. Dipper and Wendy's relationship was handled excellently. I like that you didn't go for the stale old " Will they or won't they" bit. I mean, if i'm looking for a specifically Wendip story, then yeah, I want that, but wasting half the story to get them together is ridiculous! And I applaud you Sir or Madame for taking the road less travelled. My one and only tiny microscopic complaint is that we never got to see how Robbie was farring during all this. I like how you portrayed Bill, however, the whole villian turning over a new leaf kinda thing. Exellent work! And as my parting gift to you a small bit from long cherrished Christmas classic: " GET UP C'MON GET DOWN WITH THE CHRISTMAS! GET UP C'MON GET DOWN WITH THE CHRISTMAS! GET UP C'MON GET DOWN WITH THE CHRISTMAS! OPEN UP YOUR GIFT AND THEN YOU GIVE ONE TO ME!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/5/2017
Hello. It's me again. I just realized a little detail in this story that I think you might have overlooked: we didn't see Waddles' new family. Mabel was going to pick out a Waddles Jr.
Don't get me wrong. I still love this fanfic. I just figured you'd want to know, since it seemed like a big deal in the beginning.
And again, I'm enjoying the fanfic I suspect you're almost finished with. Keep up the good work.
The Shadow Wolfe chapter 11 . 12/24/2016
Exceptionally well done.

Merry Christmas!
Kitty Cheshire chapter 11 . 12/24/2016
Aww! What a prefect end to an awesome Christmas!
Stay amazing! And you are so awesome at writing fics, just letting you know!
Kitty Cheshire
Guest chapter 11 . 12/22/2016
Dang, you update so fast! I was still figuring out my review for chapter 9 and discovered that you finished the story. So I'll just write one for all three.
Excellent story (and last three chapters). So much Christmas spirit!
First off, Dipper's conversation with Bill was pretty interesting. I could totally see Bill dating himself. And that bit of Bill in Dipper is only as powerful as he allows it, huh? What happens if he loses his cool? Do I sense a reference to Batman Arkham Knight, and is there going to be more to that later, or am I reading too much into it? Oh, and let's not forget that little hint about the future. So awesome.
Way to go Stan, Ford, and Wendy! Really showed that sorry excuse for a law enforcer! And I like how that guy made even Blubs look good.
"And a pastor, and a priest, and a rabbi walked into the Mystery Shack and it wasn't even a joke." That was one of the best and funniest lines I think you've written in this whole series. :)
I love how everyone is pulling out all the stops to make sure this underprivileged family is going to be okay. Preston especially. Gotta love his reaction to his own generosity. In the words of his daughter: "Sha-SHAH-ring?" Lol!
And the Wendip was literally sweet! Mabel has got to be ecstatic over these developments.
Just one other question: is the next story going to take place back in the summer before this special, or after this? Either way, I can't wait. And Merry Christmas to you, too!
BIuefish chapter 11 . 12/22/2016
Wow. Wow. Wow!
Absolutely love the style of this as a final chapter tieing up all the "loose" ends and making sure everyone has a moment in the spotlight when the newest addition to Gravity Falls, since lil' Soos, receives the happiness and kindness the people of Gravity Falls have to offer.
Coach Rasmussen has a total of 31 words of spoken dialog and I still enjoyed the hell out of a character like that being in the chapter (related to Mr. Poolcheck by any chance?)
Seeing the Northwest's warm up like that felt pretty awesome and the whole part was just amazingly written. One day they'll say it at the same time, don't worry Mabel.
Part 2 was perfect, it made me the happiest I've been in a while. It's just so great to see them just being happy together and being able to talk to each other like that. Dipper voicing his gratitude and Wendy responded like that was just amazing. Mabel also shows that she is able to show restraint when it comes to her brother's relationship when she knows it's necessary. It just makes her character that much more amazing and I wish the actual show had done that a bit more as well.
Part 3 was even more amazing. In more ways than that is warmed my heart. It was a perfect ending to the story you've written. The characters all just fit so perfectly and I absolutely love that, now we've seen Mabel's restraint, we also see that the Grunkles respect Wendy and Dipper like that. Having Mabel take the blackmail picture now is also a great addition because it shows that she can still meddle a bit, but knows exactly when she can.
The other reason this is the perfect ending is because this time it's Dipper's level of maturity that is allowed to shine instead of Wendy's. It mirrors the beginning of the story in such an amazing way that this story is just a great achievement in writing. If you'd tell me you write professionally it wouldn't even surprise me.
I love your style, the way you write and express the feelings and tones of this chapter make me super happy. I laughed out loud a lot during this chapter, I "aww'd" a lot during this chapter, I smiled A LOT during Wendy and Dipper's parts and I am pretty sure my eyes watered up a bit during the end.
Keep it up.
You are the best.
Merry Christmas.
BIuefish chapter 10 . 12/22/2016
Haha, nice job on creating a character as detestable as sheriff Glodson and then absolutely destroy the guy.
This chapter just totally felt like an Ocean's Eleven type movie and it was amazing! Stan is always awesome as a solo-con-man, but with Wendy by his side, it doubles the level of awesomeness. Stan's talk with Soos at the end was absolutely adorable and the reunion of the family was very nice and heartwarming.
Ghost Man chapter 11 . 12/22/2016
Aww. The end already? Oh pooh. Well goodbye doesn't last forever after all. I have a feeling the future Pines household will always be stocked with peppermint. Honestly, those ARE the best kisses as those two know.

Mabel, though...she'll find out eventually.
NecroticHate chapter 11 . 12/22/2016
Just beautiful. Just so heartwarming. Just what is needed for Cristmas, a kind and warm fairy tail with a happy end. Merry Cristmas to you!
...'Being good feels really strange' - I laughed so hard
Ghost Man chapter 10 . 12/22/2016
William, you couldn't imagine the rage I'd have pulled had that slob sob not got what was coming to him. I half expected Ford to magnetize more than the clock. Bwahahahahhahahaa. Yeah. , I can be not nice.
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