| Reviews for Changing My Life |
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   Elpatron1 chapter 18 . 1/10 just kill Dumbledore at the wizengamot meeting. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 Honestly this story iz so idiotic, like who the hell would ever believe Ron, Ginny, and Molly were only "in it for money"? Like, if you've read the series even once, then you would know that that's completely ooc I could honestly rant for hours but I don't have time to waste on this piece of crap |
| monbade chapter 4 . 9/26/2019 several things wrong with chapter. one its 1996, smart phones were not around. two they didn't have unlimited minutes, txt or data. three the phones were the size of a brick. 4th, to own and operate a motorcycle you need to be 16 in the UK, he is 15, 5th he needs insurance for the bike and have it registered which requires a license and to get a license you need to attend a school for it so no he couldn't just drive it off the showroom floor. and don't say magic because that still wouldn't make the paperwork he needed or that he was emaciated by Sirius, emancipation wouldn't allow him to by pass the laws of the muggle world. |
| asterix.dk98 chapter 38 . 9/25/2019 to much drama for drama sake, didn't move the plot and your Daphne for 85% of the story is a bitch. She has so many mood changes and harry is just an idiot |
| drucifer000 chapter 37 . 3/19/2019 I liked how it started but this story kinda took a hard right turn off the paved road with only a handful of chapters left. You introduce a bunch of time travel stuff and then to top it off you've got characters that are aspects of the universe added to it, all when the first 3/4 of it was pretty well framed already, and didnt include any of those elements. |
| Olly chapter 6 . 3/10/2019 Why would Dumbledore put such a sensitive memory into his pensieve ? That's pretty stupid. You really couldn't think of a more believable way for Harry to expose the Weasley and Dumbledore ? I mean that even worse that the : Harry was randomly walking somewhere when he caught the Weasley conveniently spilling all their secrets for some reason that we saw in so many bashing stories. |
| Olly chapter 1 . 3/10/2019 Well... To be fair to Dumbledore, he is right. Harry didn't really try seriously to learn occlumency. Sure Snape was a crappy teacher but that doesn't change the fact that Harry could have put more efforts in his study. |
| ivy9989 chapter 1 . 3/5/2019 You worked really hard to finish this but you need to go back now and edit for grammar and spelling. There are so many errors in the first chapter that I’m not going to read any more. It makes my head hurt. Sorry for the harshness, but you don’t learn if no one ever points out mistakes. |
| ammathias03 chapter 38 . 1/14/2019 This story was AMAZING and I'm really glad i read it! |
| iStyx chapter 14 . 12/28/2018 Whoa, I can't believe people still write this kind of trash nowadays. Wonders never cease! |
| Firebolt1591 chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 there is a mistake 2 sentences in. sorry, but i cannot read something with a mistake that close to the start |
| critics chapter 1 . 12/9/2018 your idea is good, your writing, sorry to say, is bad. pov/3d - crap harry/daphne is a great pairing to work with, what you made of it - crap timeskip, flashback, ... shows bad writing skills - crap get a beta, rewirte the story and it may become a good story. right now it ist just, well, duh |
| CarolWim chapter 6 . 12/8/2018 You need to get rid of your too many times repeated POV/3rd Person announcements. We get it. |
| CarolWim chapter 6 . 12/8/2018 You need to get rid of your too many times repeated POV/3rd Person announcements. We get it. |
| Andrew Peverell chapter 38 . 11/23/2018 Nicely done mate |
