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dude, nice job i liked it but the updates are just coming too slow, but i understand cuz everyone has things to do.

Okay, I already once read this fanfic, but I forgot to give it a review. Heck, I didn’t even gave it a proper review, only talked somewhat about your update policy, but fuck that, I’m here this time to talk about this Fanfiction. On another note, you seem to be a person that likes to receive a hefty review that points out weaknesses, because you want to expand your horizon, I assume. Ok then, here I am. Dunno if you gonna read this and does it even matter? Probably not, but I certainly don’t care. I’m just here to deliver what you want.
Anyway, I have to say that I like this a lot. To be precise, the Spectrcular Spider-Man section lacks Stories with pacing, except for this one, and “Fighting Crime, Spinning webs”. To be honest, most stories on here really lack a lot. They have an idea where they want to go, but a lot of unreasonable sacrifices are made to archive that. For example some of them have horrible pacing, others sacrifice how a character would behave for the sake of the story, while the next one lacks grammar, the ability to write properly and even how their story would develop. Most of them have an idea, and the following few steps that come after it, but they lack the vision to fill this idea to a proper what if scenario. Now I don’t want to look like someone who looks down on those people, neither am I here to flame them. I’m just honest really. So why do I tell you al of this? Well simple really.

You. Don’t. Lack. Any. Of. Those. Aspects.

At the same time I have to tell you, that this is pretty much just the start of the story really, and there isn’t a lot to criticise, nor the possibility to give any advices. The only advice I can give you is: Write more, advance the story so we(or in my case I) can see what you got. From what you wrote till this point I can say that this is a great set up for your story, but I have no clue what you plan to do down the latter. I mean, this is the beginning and you haven’t made many mistakes yet, and that might happen later or might happen not.
All I can review is that I like were you take your characters. For example the in-crowd. They aren’t just bullies, nor are they some dumb naive idiots. Some of them don’t like what happening to Peter and are displeased with it. Another aspect is Flash. You can already see a possible character development for him. From a bully to a person that can be so much more, and all he really needs is a hero he can look up to(Him agreeing to look for peter because he might be Suicidal for example). On another note, the idea that people will eventually find out Peters secret identity is great. All of them have some parts of the puzzle, slowly putting everything together from different angles. I like that idea, really. I personally see Glory being one of the first people to put it together, if Spidey will preach his motto. I mean it’s not a hard connection to make. Well is there anything else to talk about? Grammar and spelling is great, I personally didn’t had any problems, but I’m not a master in the English language. Take that statement with a grain of salt. Pacing is really lovely, there is nothing else to say about it. I liked Mary Jane’s introduction to Peter. She seems to be shrewd or somewhat sly, but at the same time the curious sexy person she will later become later down the line. Don’t forget, Spider-Man’s story is that of a coming of age. Well until he is in Highschool and somewhat still the case in University. Well there is really one advice I can give you. Don’t make Peter Parker, or Spider-Man to much like his comic counterpart. It sounds somewhat contradictory, but what I mean is that we have seen that thousand times. Spice it up a bit, and make somewhat more interesting, but not too much or else it breaks his character. For example put some Superior Spider-Man’s resourcefulness into your Spidey. Something like, I don’t know, taking the money from criminals and donating it to people that need it, or giving to people that got robbed by them. I’m not talking about a purse catcher, but about a crime family or something like that. Of course you would need to introduce and explain this character shift properly, or people won’t buy it from you.
I really don’t know if this fanfic is dead, it would be a shame, but that’s how it goes sometimes. A yearly update schedule, is as good as a dead update schedule. After all people have a private life. But that’s not important now.
I find a Peter and Liz pairing interesting, and would mind the classical Peter and MJ pairing. Best case scenario is the pairing with Black Cat. I’m a Peter x Felicia shipper/fanboy for LIVE! By the gods don’t do a Gwen pairing, ughhh. Or surprise me with a Betty, Black widow or Silver Sable ship Hahahaha. Whatever it is just do it, it’s your story. I’m just stating my opinion at this point.

Well I hope this satisfies you, I’m done here and may the gods bless your writing creativity and time.

Honestly as long as you stay safe and good (#1) and this finishes before I pass away, I don't care how long it takes to update and complete. Take care and stay safe. This is really good and I can't wait to see how it goes. Seeing that this was updated 10-11 months ago has me scared that this is abandoned, but I will have hope.

Update and avengers are stalking Spider-Man!

impressive keep up the good work.

I'm always looking forward to more of this story

This is actually really good! Take your time and keep up the good work!

Please update

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Actually this is much better than the original and I just binge read everything so far. but I feel it needs something more. like something to increase the drama but not reveal Peter's identity just yet

I actually like the rage you’re going about having characters learn Peters secret it’s slow but makes sense they wouldn’t automatically go aha or just never figure it out. Not saying u have to buy I really hope u update soon.

Oh damn peter Parker getting changed in front of the guys will be hilarious! Puny Parker probably has a damn ear eight pack

Wow! Great first chapter right off the bat. Hope it’s still ongoing cause damn I’m hooked already. Well written and English is good. Peter isn’t wearing all baggy clothes and is more confident as Parker which is an interesting change I look forward to seeing

hurry with the update