Reviews for The engagement
Tyreikdabest chapter 20 . 5/24
bro am I the only one tired of these fbgoddamn you want some dick then go find some leave my boy Naruto alone leave Hinata out of this she you do nothing wrongy'all ain't even like the man y'all didn't even know he existed until like two years ago sit the fdown I'm getting tired of your s
Tyreikdabest chapter 16 . 5/22
BROOOOO. AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO FUCKING HATES NARUTOS FANGIIRLS. DAMN U FOR MAKING SUCH A GOOD
Tyreikdabest chapter 13 . 5/17
jut have naruto kill anyone who disagrees with them.
Guest chapter 25 . 3/25
Nah why there is no kissing scene after giving birth for Hinata ️️
Guest chapter 5 . 2/6
Great fanfic!
Ame chapter 24 . 2/2
the exceeding of NaruHina's wedding for the last Shippudden's movie looking good!
Kenny paschal chapter 21 . 1/5
I like how naruto challenged Hitomi it was nice
imagine how hinata would feel if she was betrayed bx her beloved with the present situation at hand
W8W chapter 25 . 7/4/2019
It was fun and interesting story to read. I never read anything like this(Naruto story without fight and engagement troubles coming from rather unique source). Political struggle was very pleasant. Last two chapter after crisis was resolved were less impressive.
innovaquantum chapter 23 . 6/28/2019
What a lazy elder. Even if Naruto didn't carry that threat and married into the Hyūga Clan, some people in Konoha will start a rumor that the Hyūga Clan is the laziest clan in Konoha, even lazier than the Nara Clan. It's because they tried to force an outsider married into the Hyūga Clan and become Hokage rather than one of their clansmen become a Hokage.
LordHatredX chapter 25 . 6/25/2019
good story

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Talah 07 chapter 25 . 3/15/2019
Honestly i was late in reading this but you really nailed it
jan chapter 15 . 2/22/2019
add more romance between naruto and hinata
innovaquantum chapter 25 . 2/15/2019
Your story is interesting. It's also important that even though you're a hero doesn't mean the engagement has no obstacle. Although you could improve it by:

1. Adding Ibiki Morino to the story since this story is about 2 choices with bad things either way, the same thing with "Ibiki's tenth question".

2. Tell Keisuke that Hinata almost break the engagement because of his idea

3. Tell Hitomi that Naruto doesn't like woman that trying to take advantage of him

4. Tell Keisuke that Naruto is going to call the Yamanaka Clan and Ibiki to interrogate the Hyūga members that involved with the fight.

5. Yamato is at Ichiraku Rāmen in chapter 5, but he has no lines.

6. Konohamaru, Iruka and Kurenai supposed to have more roles.

7. Iruka and Kurenai supposed to know about the "Hyūga Clan Drama".
asmodeus prince of hell chapter 3 . 2/9/2019
Not bad I honestly liked it keep it up lad/Lassie
Firechick89 chapter 25 . 10/9/2018
so I totally just found this fic an spent all weekend reading it at work when I was on break. absolutely loved it! I cant wait to read your two future works!
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