that was so very different, but lots of fun. thanks!

Aww wish you included the interaction with Draco’s parents! Loved this though!

This was really good I liked it.

Its very interesting. Their pursuit of their dreams against their parents wishes. Plus the drarry aspect is amazing. Love this. Write on!

This is awesome. You write quidditch really well. Thank you for sharing!

I would NOT be sad if this had a follow up. Wonderful short.

I really liked your story. Very nice, especially with that end. Thank you for writing

I found it a very strange premise delightfully executed. It was so good to even imagine everyone alive and well. I'm just not sure the family ever came alive, pardon the expression, for me. They seemed to be caricatures of themselves. But I guess in a story so short, it's hard to flesh ancillary characters out. I have seen you do wonders with Narcissa in just a paragraph, though, so I'm not sure I should let you off the hook for this. ;-)

Te quedo genial XD lo que si me hubiera gustado ver un extra sobre la charla de los Malfoys cuando Draco se marchara con harry XD

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Oooooh i love it soooo much

Nice story would have liked it to read more.

I love Lucius, would have really enjoyed reading his reaction

That was sweet. I really like the confrontation with Potters and Co and I kind of regret there won't be the third part with Malfoys' reaction.

i liked it ! i'd love to read a long sequel... with politics and action and all the stuff you're so good at writing such as strategies..