Reviews for Tracer X reader Chapter 1 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to read more |
![]() ![]() When is the next chapter coming out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well glad I came back. It is readable. Just messy. |
![]() ![]() Hi on my screen it says a bunch of code then the actual text :p probs just me though |
![]() ![]() ![]() All in all, good work. Though, grammar is a little off for the most part it doesn’t take away from the story. Im glad this had been updated again. Sincerely Overwatch Fan |
![]() ![]() Further on, the story may have not been updated from here, but still being enjoyed. Keep up the good work and writing! |
![]() ![]() I know how you feel with the depression and stuff college is really tuff on your mental ability. I also have had thoughts of suicide. But a way to overcome that is this question what would your death do to your friend/family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We need more damnit |
![]() ![]() TracerXReader: Hurray! Your back! First I hope all is going well and you have overcome your troubles. Second, this chapter was a nice re entry from your absence. The only problem I saw were minute grammar errors. Keep up the great work! Overwatch Fan |
![]() ![]() Yo grammar check and beta read ur chapters before posting them because it looks and sound really weird but if it was checked it would have sounded a lot more smooth |
![]() ![]() u suck dick |
![]() ![]() This is still pretty good as long as toy update it! |
![]() ![]() Nice, but I already read that on wattpad |
![]() ![]() I'm so sry of this is annoying, but I have yet to c the review on the board. Sry! Hey. I just want to say thank you for sharing all your personal craziness with us...that takes guts. Also while I may not have the problems of anxiety and depression and sucidal thought, I hope to God I'm not outside my zone to say this but, my girlfriend has chronic depression. She has social anxiety, she has Skitsafrena, daily night terrors, is balemic, she has tried to take her own life also... to top it all off her parents are compete shit. Ones a drunk and another is hopeless... I'm her only positive supporte in her entire world. Sure it means 3am wake ups b/c she can't sleep. Riding in -10 degree weather to go to her house and comfert her when things with said Dad were bad. While this isn't ur POV, I understand what it means to unconditionally support and love someone who's life is a complete mess. With that said. Please, take your time, collect your thoughts, get your work done and relax with your girl. Be happy. I'll pray for you tonight author. May god ease your burdens and your worries. Amen. Overwatch Fan P.S. ...if u need to end the story for the reason of being unable to continue, just do it. We will understand |
![]() ![]() The run on sentences is a bit annoying. Breaking it up with a thousand commas doesn't always do it. But its pretty good other than that! |