Reviews for The Red Devil and The Blue Serpent |
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Guest chapter 8 . 6/17 Please update this story |
rama alif chapter 8 . 3/16 come on update again |
ManticoreBlues chapter 8 . 9/22/2019 love the fanfic so far |
TOWTWUKER chapter 4 . 9/28/2018 Sorry, who's the s&m charcter again? |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 8 . 8/17/2018 huh. very interesting. |
loldelegate chapter 8 . 10/5/2017 Yaaay this is really good story, please continue (I still havent found "Life Note" to send "dead" authors back to world of living :D |
HBEggs chapter 1 . 9/8/2017 Holds promise. Longer chapters would be appreciated, but it's still good as is. |
Phantom chapter 8 . 8/14/2017 Good |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/14/2017 Glad to see this story isn't dead |
kou chapter 7 . 6/12/2017 oi oi oi author, is that all? please update soon. my adrenaline won't stop from reading your story. please update I beg you. keep up the good work |
flunk chapter 7 . 5/2/2017 Before you start to write stories check your spelling lessons...DUMMY! Hahahaha..shame on you., |
Asianpotter1 chapter 6 . 4/13/2017 The start is pretty good. I'd like to see more soon |
livelmao chapter 6 . 1/23/2017 make a bit longer chapters and update soon |
Alrain chapter 5 . 1/3/2017 You make to short chapters try to make it a little bit longer |
ajas136 chapter 3 . 12/26/2016 I'm not much a review, but it would be nicer that if you put out longer chapters if your not updating on a regular schedule. Other than that I would say rather than looking at the review counts look more into the follow counts since a lot of ppl are following.. You might want to change the rating to T until the M charter is posted to gain more popularity. It's a great start so far just don't make Nagisa to OP right now since his fortay isn't strength and combat like most of the devils, it's more combination of one hit kills and movesets he learns from his teachers. For your future fight scenes maybe rewatching or reading Karma vs Nagisa will help spark some creative move sets. |