ohh Tony this one is amazing and u should continue writing like these..

Okay, that was just adorkable. I loved the first part, and how much you stayed in character for them. The circumstances didn't feel forced but a natural occurrence that I could see played out in my head. The second part, adorable and I loved that you carried Star Wars into it. An awesome one shot, and I would definitely encourage more.

This was SO cute! I mean I love Tony and Pepper regardless, and this just told me how much I loved them more! You actually, to be honest, kinda played the most beautiful image of them together even with Tony being with Whitney. It was beautiful, and I'm so in love with this story!

ABSOLUTELY KEEP WRITING MORE LIKE THIS!

It's good. Really good and please give next chapter. And forgive me for that last comment in your story. I get carried away. I'm IMAA lover and you too as I see your miracle stories. Update fast okey? ;)

Whoa, that was super adorable! Something I definitely need more of! I mean, it's just perfect! From the way it was written to the accuracy of character (and events) to all the little moments. I will always fall in love with your writing and I'll never tire of saying so! If that doesn't answer your question, I don't know what will.

I want to say that you are very good with following plot points and making them your own. (If that makes sense) I always forget about all these little plot points that aren't always little. Maybe that has to do with natural having access anymore to the show, so I can't rewatching episodes so easily.

Anywho, thanks for the beautiful story! I absolutely love it!