At chapter 1.

"Though, we might want to throw in the occasional strawberry. She loves those too."

"Disturbing mental images aside, I guess it might be worth a try." Weiss vocalized her thoughts.

I see what you did there, Author.

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Very interesting idea. Will follow. Hope you update soon.

Just found this story. Enjoyed reading it. Hope you continue.

Hoping for more of this - its epic

Good writing. This has a lot of potential of being a good Swarm-building story.

I love it, please continue this story... it remains me of a similar fanfic with yang

so there is a secend brood war going on and it would appear that the ice queen will have to fight her way to the top just like what Kerrigan had to do after her redeption in the heart of the swarm campaign.

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Just realized the humorous response Weiss could have given Blake on the alien impregnation question. "Not until the x date at least" I really want to see Blake's response to that and the team's response to Blake given a conditional yes to her fetish.

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It was the Cerebrates that the Broodmothers replaced. the queens were replaced by the lesser broodmotheresque Queen after the Cerebrates were replaced.

I enjoyed the chapter. The battle scene was decent, flags were raised for Salem, and Stukov is here and apparently taking after his Co-op play style.

Woo! Another awesome chapter, and we've got Stukov thrown into the mix too! Keep up the great work dude!

Stukov!? What... when... how... STUKOV!?
Okay, this story just went from 'fairly interesting' to 'pretty fucking interesting'. Does Weiss know about him? Hm... probably not. So, what happened again? How Swarm could just LOSE their main Leviathan? And this probably means Remnant is in Koprulu sector. *sigh* So, when others arrive? BTW, Stukov, you just hit the nail. And name of that nail is Salem. Heh. She's probably getting nervous, mounting such big attack.
Anyway, another great chapter. When will be next? P. S.: Ultralisks *manic smile*

Great Chapter!

XD Ultralisks from Nydus network. How terrifying. Also Alexei is being the same old shadowy douche that he is I see (Not that I would prefer him any other way)? Add that we have now a new Broodmother as well, it should be interesting. So what happened to Dehaka? Is he going to make a appearance as well or no? Also there are quite a bit of grammar mistakes but not too bad. Looking forward to the next chapter. XD

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)

Clever little idea making Weiss a Queen of Blades. I particularly enjoyed various little aspects such as the explanation for why Weiss still aged like a normal Terran, going barefoot in Creep, and Ruby giving Weiss a hug. I noticed some editing errors such as words occasionally missing and misspellings, although a few are humorous such as spelling toilet as toilette. Over all, good story

good story